Date: December 06, 2006 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 24
"Maybe I'll just bend you over the copier.”
Please write this. Please. So good.
Love her leaving the note.
Author's Response:
Ha! Hey lots of crazy things happen at Christmas parties...
Date: December 06, 2006 10:35 am Title: Chapter 24
oops! Just left you a review for chapter 24 on the chapter 1 page...how'd that happen? I guess I was distracted by Jim's diving skills.
Author's Response: hee hee - it's a sign you need to read the whole thing over again. (Nooooo! Even I haven't read the whole thing through from the beginning..!) ;-)
9 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2006 10:35 am Title: Chapter 24
Ouch, when you mentioned the copier, I immediately got an image of Jim and Karen at the opening of last week's episode. NO! Fortunately, the image of Jim and Pam on his desk erased the image! Sweet.
Author's Response: It was my way of exorcising the Karen demons out of the copier, so it's free to use for Jam things again....
Date: December 06, 2006 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Moxie, this was worth waiting for. Just...yum. And, nice to see Jim pursuing his diving talents again. What a guy! Thanks for this juicy reprieve from triangular shenanigans.
Author's Response: Yes, I think's it's widely accepted that his is indeed skilled in so many things.....I wonder what he'll do to top that before she goes back to Scranton....
10 [Report This]Date: December 06, 2006 10:21 am Title: Chapter 24
So glad you updated. Sex on the desk is one of my favorite fantasies for Jim and Pam. I'm glad someone wrote it.
Author's Response: I'm surprised I was the first - but sure glad you liked it. :-)
Date: December 06, 2006 09:48 am Title: Chapter 24
Moxie, you (almost) make me wish that the Stamford branch hadn't closed. And DiveMaster!Jim is excellent. Hee! I like your AU much better, can I live there, please?
Author's Response: Sure thing, lisahoo - I plan on moving there too if those two kids don't get together soon!!! Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: December 05, 2006 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 24
WOW. In the words of Kevin: Niiiiiiiiice.
Author's Response: Thanks - this is so my Alternative Universe. It keeps me sane when I watch what happens on Thursday nights...
10 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2006 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Darling what a wonderful wonderful story! Every day I keep checking to see if there is a new chapter! I really love the way you've captured Jim and Pam's characters and showed this whole new side of them. It's very intriguing! Also can I just say how much I LOVE Jonathan? He is the perfect cupid! XD
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Awww - thanks so much for the kind words! Jonathan is an extrapolation of a character girl7 created - I just put a Moxie twist on him to make him mine for this story. I think I'll keep him though!
Date: November 14, 2006 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 23
Oh, if only every fic had a shower scene... Loved it.
Date: November 14, 2006 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 23
no no. I agree with Jim, keep the clothes off. Plus naked Jim...mmmmmm
9 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2006 06:40 am Title: Chapter 23
Okay, so a scalp massage from Jim? Lovin' in the shower? Sorry - no more coherent words can come from me.... SWEET!
Author's Response: Heh - that's the second time I've put Jim in the shower. I wonder what the attraction could be... ;-) Maybe next time they'll go with bubbles in the tub....
Date: November 13, 2006 07:39 am Title: Chapter 23
clothing forbidden zone
*thud*
Moxie -- you know how to start the week off right :o) Pam and Jim in Stamford.
Date: November 11, 2006 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Is this finished? I hope not!
Author's Response: No, I hope to have a few more chapters before I wrap it up. A new chapter should be up on a few days...
Date: November 03, 2006 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 22
By the way, I forgot to thank you for Snow Patrol's "Chasing Cars". I write fic to that song. Wonderful.
Date: November 03, 2006 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 22
It was worth the long wait for
"I always did."
Yeah, he did. And does.
10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2006 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 22
That was so good. I liked how in the car it was easier to have an honest conversation because he didn't have to directly look at her. I've been in that situation before. And the long-anticipated first time? Hot and real. Good, good, good.
Date: November 03, 2006 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 22
Finally! And wow. That's all I can say.
Date: November 03, 2006 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 22
Well for not being well that was a fantastic chapter. Great job.
Date: November 03, 2006 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 22
I'm sorry for whatever's making you go to the hospital. Whether you're there as a visitor or a patient, I hope everything works out.
The conversation in the car was such a contrast for the ones they usually have, where they avoid issues and keep secrets from the other. The honesty of it was refreshing. Oh, and of course the last part was very, very hot :-)
Date: November 03, 2006 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 22
Wow! You did such a great job with building the anticipation, and the payoff was great! I love how it wasn't mind-blowingly perfect the first time - it's more real, knowing that it was nice but it'll get better and was more about the emotional connection.
And so sorry you've been in the hospital! Hope everything's ok.
Date: November 03, 2006 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 22
Glad you're out of the hospital Moxie, and apparently your computer problem is solved! Thanks for the sweet release after 21 chapters of foreplay.
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2006 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 21
Whew. I've been meaning to read this forever and I just did all in one sitting. I really liked it, especially the scene about ten chapters ago where they watched Notorious together. That is one of my all time favorite movies!
I'm looking forward to the happy ending! That's what...nah, too easy ;)
8 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2006 02:20 am Title: Chapter 21
Another great chapter. I love playful!Pam. And I like seeing Jim being a part of "guy talk" with Jonathan.
Question: why is Pam crying at the end of the chapter?
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2006 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 21
Guh, I so love this. I just like the way it's played out between the two of them, even if it isn't what's on the show. It's really, really good and I am so on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2006 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 21
Loved this chapter, especially the hot part!
I did notice a word left out of this sentence, though - Jim laughed, and put his arms around her. "I promise," he teased, "I'm not anywhere." And this line was a bit confusing to me - "When she reached the base, she slid completely him and out of her mouth."
Author's Response: aha - thanks for the catch! I'll correct it accordingly. And thanks for sticking along with the story!!