10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2006 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 19
As usual you did not disappoint. I love the Halpert brothers house tours! And the pillow fight was even better than I imagined! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much - I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
Date: October 23, 2006 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
Pillow fight! Nice.
Author's Response: Yes, that's just what I was going for.... :-D
Date: October 21, 2006 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 18
Lovely chapter. Absolutely loved this line - "Do you mind?" he asked, "Must you lust after me so openly?"
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2006 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful chapter. I loved Pam telling Jim how what happened affected her. This sentence was especially good in its clarity of what she felt - "But the best part was that he didn't even tell me that this was the only chance I had, because I found out the next time I came into work that he'd taken an immediate transfer to another branch two states away." Very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks, Kaystar. I do believe the series better address the fact that Jim wasn't the only 'victim' - they both were hurt pretty badly.
Date: October 21, 2006 08:08 am Title: Chapter 18
Where can I sign up for a Jim Halpert massage? It just looks like so much fun...
I like the rythm (sp?) you're setting up. Slow enough to make sense, but not so slow as to be improbable.
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2006 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wow this series is such a tease! I love it but you've gotta keep writing!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2006 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 18
Back-rubs are sexy. This was very, very sweet. And they really did need to reconnect after the hard conversation in the last chapter.
Date: October 20, 2006 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 16
Cute chapter. So glad that Pam made the drive to Philly to see Jim. Hopefully Jim won't blow it by telling her about the attempted seduction!
9 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2006 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 18
Mmmm, I'm just in bliss imagining a massage from Jim. Pam's a very lucky lady. I'd let him injure my shoulder any time if that's the consequence!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2006 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
This was so sweet. Also, I now desperately want a massage:)
Date: October 20, 2006 06:26 am Title: Chapter 18
He can give me a massage anytime. How could she have fallen asleep after that?;)
Date: October 20, 2006 05:51 am Title: Chapter 18
Moxie that was such a freaking adorable chapter! I loved the teasing and this line She shook her head sadly. "There's just no hope for you, is there?" made me smile. Thanks for the Friday morning cheer.
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 17
HEY- I just wanted to let you know (after having seeing 'Initiation') that there was NOTHING in Jim and Pam's phone conversation to suggest that they HADN'T had a secret relationship the whole time!!! Trust me, I've gone back and watched it at least 20 times. Lol. I immediately thought of this fic, and was determined to tell you NOT TO MAKE IT AU!!! It could STILL work!! Okay, realistically, MAYBE Jim and Pam haven't been having this relationship..but I love this fic so much, and I'd hate to see it go AU!!! There was absolutely NOTHING in their conversation to suggest that they haven't been secretly seeing each other!!!! The awkwardness at the end was a little bit off, but that happens to my boyfriend and me all the time, espeically on the phone, so it's possible that it happened with Jim and Pam, too. KEEP WRITING!!! I LOVE YOU!!! (not in a creepy stalker way, but you get the point, right?)
Author's Response: You have made a very valid point. For now we'll believe it's still not AU. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm happy Pam finally told Jim how the whole situation had been for her...I haven't reviewed a lot these past couple of days, but I truly love this story, and will go check out the other stories you've posted a little later.
Author's Response: Thanks, Luna - I'm so glad you are enjoying this.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 08:04 pm Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful, as always. I really appreciate your take on Pam's view of things. (It kind of brings to mind that scene in The Way We Were, when Barbra Streisand calls Robert Redford and tells him that she lost her husband and best friend and that she really needs her best friend right now.) Truly, truly love this and am really greatful for all the time and effort you are putting into your writing.
Author's Response:
Wow - I hadn't thought of that (Haven't seen the movie in ages!), but that's a pretty great analogy. Thank god Jam won't end up that way. (At least not in MY world!) - I blame my latest explosion of writing on insomnia, but at least something good is coming of it!
Thanks for being so sweet and supportive!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2006 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm glad you put in Pam's perspective. It's all too easy for us to take that cute boy's side!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope she gets her side out on the series, too!
Date: October 18, 2006 08:19 am Title: Chapter 17
WOW. Love how you incorporated plot developments from "The Convention" into this. Pam explaining her side of that story is AWESOME -- I SOOOO hope some element of that makes it into the show. Good for her, explaining why she couldn't just be swept away.
And you ARE making me insane waiting for the next chapter, BTW. Thanks so much for writing these!!
Date: October 18, 2006 06:41 am Title: Chapter 17
Ah comforting Jim
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 17
That's a lovely scene; I like that they are talking things out, honestly, but they already know where they ultimately stand, so it's not quite so scary.
9 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 16
I've been horrible about reviewing this fic but I really am loving every moment of it. I'm so glad that Pam showed up at the convention. It's about time she took some initiative.
Wonderful job capturing these characters.
Date: October 17, 2006 06:40 am Title: Chapter 16
Dinner downstairs? What about room service? ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 05:53 am Title: Chapter 16
So sweet. Good for Pam! Jim is definitely worth a two-hour drive.
9 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 04:10 am Title: Chapter 16
Okay, the surprise reunion was officially like the best thing ever. Pam's a clever one, tricking him like that :)
FYI, I got a little lost in the first line of the paragraph after the text, " YES, HE'S BORING ME TO DEATH." - looks like a couple of your sentences got cut off?
Author's Response: Yes, I just noticed. I'll get that fixed now. Thanks!
Date: October 17, 2006 02:45 am Title: Chapter 16
LOVE that Jim gets to call Pam about the hooker in your version!!! GO PAM!!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2006 02:20 am Title: Chapter 16
I love how you've made this fit with the episode--everything melds perfectly. That's why Pam seemed so distracted talking to Tom! I love the surprise, too!