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Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2016 07:46 pm Title: Well it kind of hurts when the kind of words you say kind of turn themselves into blades

Pam is so into herself. Ho w incredibly rude to treat Jim like that. he should walk! (PS is Ben that ugly douche Alex?)

Reviewer: epiphilly Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 04:14 am Title: Well it kind of hurts when the kind of words you say kind of turn themselves into blades

This is a wonderful story. It is impossible not to connect with the heartbreak in both of them. What Jim siad to Pam, though, really did break my heart. I hope Jim can prove himself to Pam, I hope they can trust eachother and work it out, and I hope you update very soon.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2008 07:41 pm Title: Well it kind of hurts when the kind of words you say kind of turn themselves into blades

omg, pam's a little bit evil here lol, saying that, I'd take Jim back even if he ate my hamster lol. I can't wait to see what is next!

Reviewer: untherapy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2008 08:00 pm Title: Well it kind of hurts when the kind of words you say kind of turn themselves into blades

Pam - 1; Jim - 0!!! this is good, just promise you won't drag it out for toooo many chapters :P

Reviewer: thatswhatshesaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2008 08:40 pm Title: Well it kind of hurts when the kind of words you say kind of turn themselves into blades

well written angst turns me into some sort of masochist/sadist or something because i'm crazy psyched for chapter 3... but i REALLY like where it's going :)

Reviewer: Saboteur Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2008 04:21 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

Wow! Did not expect that from Pam at the end. Surely if Jim is feeling insecure, then Pam needs to assure him of her love for him. Her doubting him may send him the wrong signals.

Loving this story though, am totally hooked!

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2008 04:14 pm Title: Well it kind of hurts when the kind of words you say kind of turn themselves into blades

Wow...I love the angst!

Anxiously awaiting to see where this story goes...please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks you! I'll try and update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2008 04:12 pm Title: Well it kind of hurts when the kind of words you say kind of turn themselves into blades

Yikes, this is a Pam weren't not used to.  I hope she takes some time to really think about where Jim is coming from.  They definitely need to sit down and talk.

Author's Response: They'll have their talk in the next, don't worry! :)

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2008 04:09 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

I liked the first chapter, but personally I think Pam is over-reacting at the end of the 2nd. Yes Jim was out of line, but he said things in the heat of the moment. To ask him to prove his love for her after all he has been through with her is a bit unfair, especially just because of one mistake. I hope she realizes this in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Well yes Pam is overreacting. To me, I believe she would over react because it's their first fight and she's very upset angry over what Jim said to her. They both have made mistakes though and really need to talk it out when they're not upset with each other. I hope you'll stick with the story, it will get better!

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2008 05:46 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

aw! so sad. i love it. update asap

Reviewer: SpoilerAlert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2008 10:42 am Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

O_O I am not usually a fan of angst but I really could connect to this. I do hope you're continuing!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 07:13 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

OMG, are you going to continue? I can see Jim being upset and maybe saying something, but I dont think he'd mean it. So I can't wait to see where you go with this.

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 05:59 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

I suspect we'll be seeing something similar in an upcoming episode, although I hope it won't be this bad! I fear Jim still isn't feeling 100% secure about Pam's intentions.

Nice job, keep going (I hope you have make-up sex coming up soon!)

Reviewer: malaz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 04:54 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

Alright...I'm really OK with this angst, because they can't be perfect like we all think they are. However, please don't end it like this...I need to see some resolution, with some kind of happy ending...please?

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 04:15 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

I love this story.  I find it very realistic that Jim would finally blow.  He said things he didn't mean.  Please keep going.

Reviewer: bright_lights_4 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 03:58 pm Title: You're the kind of girl who can take down a man

I am intrigued by this story. I would really like to see it be continued! I like angst at times and this seems like a realistic portrayal of couples. Sometimes they say things they really don't mean and people end up getting hurt. Good job!

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