Date: October 27, 2008 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
gah! oh my goodness this is PRECIOUS. i love it! i love the idea of practicing, the idea of them dancing, and i ESPECIALLY love that he can't control himself. there are times when just certain words stick out to me as awesome. such as: "a family which would soon be your own" and "dangerous hips" *sigh* i love it :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2008 03:19 am Title: Chapter 1
so perfect, soft and simple and sweet. left me feeling all happy and content!
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2008 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeeeeeeeeeek super cute, loved it :)
Date: October 17, 2008 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw! This is really cute. I love the image of them dancing without music in the middle of the night.That's really a nice moment.
Date: October 14, 2008 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
oh I love the intimacy of this. Such a perfect mid of the night moment for them. You've managed to make this FEEL like 3a.m...wonderful.
Date: October 13, 2008 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet and lovely. I can see Jim being nervous about doing everything "just right".
Date: October 13, 2008 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful. Short and sweet. I really wanted more, but then the ending blew me away. I think it's perfection, just as it is. You're amazing, unfold.
Date: October 13, 2008 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love. I got so carried away in this quiet little moment of them laughing together! I just love that it's Jim that wants to know how they should kiss. So romantic and so beautifully done, unfold!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was beautiful, as always. Just what I needed :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was just lovely. You can just feel their intense happiness throughout. Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 11:27 am Title: Chapter 1
This story is just blissful, unfold.
My favorites: You looked down at her there, her skin washed in the dim light, her hair flooding on the floor behind her head. “I might get carried away,” you said. You were very serious about that even though she didn’t seem to think so. What a beautiful image.
And this: You warned her then, you said, with your hands moving to those dangerous hips of hers, “I don’t think that’s going to be enough for me.” Just delicious.
Adding this to my favorites.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeous writing, as always. This scene is so vivid and so something I could see happening. Their happiness really comes to life and put a smile on my face. Thanks, as always, for being so good to these characters.
Date: October 13, 2008 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
*melt* This is lovely to think about on a crummy Monday.
(I sure hope the documentary crew finds a way to sneak into their wedding...)