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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2022 07:49 pm Title: february, won't you be my valentine?

"They'll say that they united over Dwight and Michael and the mysteries of Dunder Mifflin. That would be true. They'll claim that they stay together because of the pranks. That would not be true.

If he looks at their time spent together as a relationship of a hundred days, he would say that nineteen days are spent talking about Dwight. Eleven about the people at work, in general. Two days go to the time they spend with people they're romantically linked to. Sixteen about the people they aren't romantically linked to - family, friends. Seventeen days about small things, silly things. Twenty-seven about them, together or separate. Four about dreams. Four days would be spent silent.

They stay together because of those four days. And all the rest."

The calculator section haunts me.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2008 10:14 am Title: february, won't you be my valentine?

Wow, that was a really cool experience. I liked that you left out some of the connections so that I got to make them myself. A perfect way to not be overt about things. Nice job!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 18, 2008 06:13 am Title: february, won't you be my valentine?

I loved it. I really did. It was disjointed, but the feelings were continuous, and it just, it brought to life sort of all these little scenes through the feelings. It's great.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :D I kind of love the way you described this - I'm so glad it worked for you!

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2008 12:46 pm Title: february, won't you be my valentine?

this is gorgeous!
i love the way you write in little pieces that all fit together.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. :D I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Desslok Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2008 05:00 am Title: february, won't you be my valentine?

Hmmm... now I have to go back and re-read it to figure it all out. :) Great fic!

Reviewer: Desslok Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2008 06:46 pm Title: february, won't you be my valentine?

I enjoyed this. It's unusual, but moving and true to character. Not sure I know where the numbers/words are coming from, but I probably don't need to know. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :D And heh - there's ten (diamond anniversary year), for example; or eleven's form in numbers: double 'ones', side by side, reading the same when upside down. thirteen as an opposite of 'unlucky'. things like that. 

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2008 03:09 pm Title: february, won't you be my valentine?

"When he finally tells her, he isn't ready."

Wow, I love that line.



Author's Response: Aw, thank you. :D That was one of the first I wrote, actually!

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