10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2011 09:02 pm Title: Those Bold City Girls
Reallllllllllly loved this
Date: December 14, 2008 09:26 am Title: Don't Leave Me...
It's always endearing to me to have Jim and his mom together.
Date: December 14, 2008 07:25 am Title: Those Bold City Girls
These stories really fill in a lot of the things that we "weren't told" in this season, I'm really enjoying them.
This made me laugh:
"And...the super power to be invisible."
Date: December 14, 2008 03:13 am Title: Don't Leave Me...
Actually I'm pretty sure it's you who rock at life Binxbaby/b>, well you and Jim's mum I guess. This chap is awesome, Jim feels really in character here and I love how you've written his relationship with his mom. Perfect :)
8 [Report This]Date: December 14, 2008 01:15 am Title: Don't Leave Me...
Sweet chapter. Nice to see Pam and Jim's mum getting along well. And their little conversation at the end was perfect. Looking forward to more :)
Date: November 14, 2008 09:41 pm Title: Brother
I like the way you write Jim's brothers. it makes them a lot easier to like.
I am really enjoying this story. Hope you update again soon!
9 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2008 11:06 am Title: Brother
I really like this context for Jim's brothers. I wanted to like them in the episode and I just didn't (mostly because I had several issues with the casting and direction of that episode, but whatev). I like that they are jerks, but they love Jim and Jim loves them and that's just how they are. It really works and makes those scenes more enjoyable now ;)
9 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2008 10:26 am Title: Brother
Great chapter, Binx. Love the history you created for Jim and his brothers. Poor Jennifer ; )
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2008 10:12 am Title: Those Bold City Girls
I really liked this chapter. It would have been too easy to have made out that Jim's brothers are always asses, I think it's way more realistic what you've portrayed, that they are cool brothers, they just like teasing Jim and think for whatever reason their form of teasing is hilarious.
Customer Survey next, looking forward to reading more :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2008 10:00 pm Title: Come Home
These are adorable! You balance cute dialogue and thoughtful introspection just perfectly, and you do it all in a very believable tone too! I can actually hear their voices in your dialogue sometimes, it's so freaky. And speaking as someone who is in a long-distance relationship, you got Jim's perspective on the subject just right. Amazing job!! Please continue!!!
Date: October 30, 2008 10:33 am Title: Come Home
Oh gawd, I miss Pam, too. Thanks for a little dose of FNB-NYC, BB.
6 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2008 08:12 pm Title: Hasn't Felt Like Home
Wow, I love this story! Can't wait for more.
9 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2008 04:03 pm Title: Hasn't Felt Like Home
Wow, you write dialogue really well and really have a good sense of how these two interact with each other. Loved your version of the incident at the laundromat. I am truly enjoying this one!
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2008 09:49 am Title: Hasn't Felt Like Home
GORGEOUS chapter!! I absolutely love your version of the laundromat incident! Love how Jim takes charge and buys the washer/dryer for Pam. Love how you tie it in at the end with his need to just connect and tell her he loves her. And that her smartass answer is what puts them back in sync. Perfect!
Date: October 22, 2008 07:14 am Title: Hasn't Felt Like Home
That last quick phone call was perfect. I really loved your version of the crazy laundry guy. Great chapter.
Date: October 22, 2008 04:40 am Title: Those Bold City Girls
This made me all warm and fuzzy. I love "decisive Jim" and you wrote them very well. Great explanation for the "man at the wash" story.
Please keep writing.
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Hasn't Felt Like Home
I absolutely *love* the way you captured Jim and Pam's banter in this chapter. My favorites:
"What?! Jim...no!"
"Yet...we're going to anyway. Funny how that works."
"I can't afford a washer and dryer."
"Didn't say anything about you paying for it."
So sweet and so Jim. :)
"I love you."
"Who is this?" she chuckled.
"Don't be funny. I'm being completely serious," he laughed.
"Well then, I love you too, strange person on my phone."
Adorable. Jim being protective at the laundromat (No one would ever treat Pam like that. Ever) was great. Amazing job!!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 08:35 pm Title: Hasn't Felt Like Home
I sure hope it was back in sync without the gay boy band affiliation.
Awesome chapter. :) I could really see Jim and Pam having that moment and everything. Pretty spiffy stuff.
9 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Hasn't Felt Like Home
Oh, I love this! Seriously, I love the frustration tempered by the fact that everything is just hard and he knows he shouldn't be frustrated, but can't help it. Great description of the crazy guy laundry incident! Just really great piece tonight!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2008 07:40 pm Title: Those Bold City Girls
Just want to say I'm really enjoying it, and can't wait for more!
Date: October 18, 2008 01:26 pm Title: All the Pretty Girls Go to the City
Aw, poor Jim! I'm just loving this story though.
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2008 05:36 am Title: All the Pretty Girls Go to the City
I'm really enjoying this story. You write very well and your characterizations are dead on. Can't wait for the next chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2008 12:37 am Title: All the Pretty Girls Go to the City
I'm really enjoying this one, Binxbaby. It's at times both painfully sad and totally joyous to experience. And I'll say what I say in my reviews for every fic that I read that contains it -- my absolute favorite thing that "fic" Jim does that the "real" Jim has never done -- call Pam "Bees." I think it is the most endearing thing ever, and if it ever happened on the actual show, I think I might cry tears of joy. And hey, I love that Natalie Portman movie, even if they do get married at Wal-Mart :-)
Date: October 17, 2008 09:15 pm Title: All the Pretty Girls Go to the City
I love this. It's sweet and sexy and very realistic, especially given what we know of their relationship so far this season. Can't wait for more :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2008 09:01 pm Title: All the Pretty Girls Go to the City
Thanks for the quick update, Binx. Loved this even more than the first chap ("friskiness" anyone?). Loved the intimate moments, of course, but also the way you fill in the S5 blanks with nice little details--Jim's injured shoulder as the aftermath of Michael's tackling him, wedding plans, Pam's RA interruptions. All were really enjoyable.