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Reviewer: pretzel_day Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2021 05:27 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

Good story! I still reread it sometimes when I need a smile. :)

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 16, 2008 11:10 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

Ha!  Not only have you written the WNtW people perfectly, you've done a darn good job writing Kelly!  Kelly was hilarious in your story.  You should be so proud of this.  It really turned out well and is unlike anything on this site.  You know, lots of people on the boards miss the old Pam.  Not me; I'm glad she's Fancy and New.  Thanks for writing a great little fic about her transformation.  It was really fun to follow.

Happy Holidays!

 



Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!! I'm really glad you liked Kelly; she is so outrageous and really fun to write because she can just go off on any kind of tangent she wants. And I'm so with you in the Pam camp; I think New Pam is way more interesting of a character, and it was so interesting dissecting her transformation and writing about it. Thank you so much again for all your wonderful reviews, and have a happy holiday!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 05:49 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

Excellent work, DA-S!  From start to finish, this fic was such fun.  I especially enjoyed your epilogue--very sweet (and nicely sexy at the end)  :)  I've been thinking of you lately when I see Stacy London hawking shampoo in commercials.  And to think that I wouldn't know who she was if not for you! 

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you liked the epilogue. I think the nice Jammy ending was just what the story needed. And I've seen her in those commercials too! Glad I could give you an impression of her; I personally think she's a little more bitchy than in those commercials, but I guess bitchy doesn't sell shampoo. ;) Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2008 01:18 am Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

Oh darlin...this was just fantastic from beginning to end. This was a great way to wrap this up! Very sweet, but not in that shmaltzy way.

This was the best. Also I love you.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you didn't think it was too sappy. I was a tad worried about that, but you definitely convinced me otherwise. :) Thanks so much for the encouragement and wonderful reviews!!

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 09:33 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

I really enjoyed this story, sorry I am just now reviewing, but it was really a fun read.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it, and that you reviewed at all. :D

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 03:28 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

YAY! I was happy to see a cute little epilogue at the end. (and the shoutout was nice too!) I'm kind of sad to see this one go....but all good things must end, right?



Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad you liked the epilogue. I know, I'm sad too, but hopefully I'll have something in the works soon. It' all just a matter of getting my ideas on paper. Thanks so much again!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 03:07 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

YAAAAAAAAAY, cute ending, so happy I read this.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad it was a worthwhile read. :D

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 02:49 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

Great Job

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

Reviewer: fashion_show_at_lunch Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 02:42 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

yay I loved this story! I watch alot of What Not To Wear. You did a great job the whole way through. I love the whole secret boyfriend bit, haha. Stacy and Clinton would react exactly in this way. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, Stacy and Clinton are very fun to write, and would definitely tease Pam about that. :) Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 02:29 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

I got a shout out! Woo! But you are the one who deserves all the praise. This was a fantastic idea for a crossover of two shows that I love. Every time WNTW has come on since I started reading this story, I can't help but think of it. I'm actually kind of sad it's over. Now I know how Stacy and Clinton feel when they have to send their victims... er... clients home after their transformation is complete. It's a bit bittersweet. And I loved seeing Pam and Jim together alone in the epilogue. So sweet. Thanks so much for this story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so glad the actual show reminds you of this story; I definitely agree that it's probably how Stacy and Clinton feel after they say goodbye to their "clients." ;) I'm especially glad you enjoyed the ending. I thought it was missing a little bit of Jammy sweetness. Thank you so much for the lovely reviews!!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 02:16 pm Title: EPILOGUE: After The Reveal

AW!!!!!!!! That was adorable. I'm so glad we got to have that cute little Jammy moment because I was really looking forward to Jim's reaction to all of this.

I had so much fun reading this. You obviously know both shows really well which totally made this seem like something that could actually happen. Really well written. Fabulous job!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I felt like it needed a little Jammy moment to wrap it up. Glad you enjoyed the blending of the two shows as well; it was very fun crossing them over. Thank you so much for all your kind reviews!!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2008 01:53 pm Title: ACT VI: The Big Reveal

Okay, so I got a little distracted with finals and kind of forgot about this story, but I caught a rerun of WNTW this morning and it reminded me of your story so I just got caught up and I LOVED it! The WNTW format was so much fun. I could like see the little interviews and stuff. In fact, I could really see the whole thing. So, nice work! I can't wait for the epilogue.



Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! I know, I had finals of my own that I had to deal with; luckily this story gave me kind of a break. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the WNTW format! It was a really different and interesting way of writing, and I'm glad it worked. And I just posted the epilogue; can't wait for you to read it! Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2008 10:14 am Title: ACT VI: The Big Reveal

"...people certainly won’t be able to ignore me anymore. They’ll notice the confidence will be there too, a little more.”

This is so PAM at this point - I just love this line so much. It's like, you're almost there, almost at full confidence, and yet that "a little more" is so subtle...brilliant.

And hands down, Michael's TH-type deal was the BEST thing EVAH. Such a fantastic, perfect line. And SO FUNNY!

This is really great, babe...you're so on-point, mixing these universes together. Brava. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! I totally agree, like in Beach Games and The Job she was feeling a lot more confident than ever before but it's still not anything compared to what we've seen her at in seasons 4 and 5, so the "little more" is definitely about her being the most confident she can be and not kinda trying to summon the courage. And I really didn't think Michael's TH would get such a big response, but apparently I did well! :) So glad you liked it. Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 07:11 pm Title: ACT VI: The Big Reveal

Amazing. I really enjoyed it, and I'd never seen the us version of that show :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 05:26 pm Title: ACT II: Learning The Rules

Okay, I couldn't resist, so I read one more chapter. But now I really do have to go to dinner. Can't wait to finish this. Your Stacy and Clinton are still spot on! :)

Author's Response: LOL! Glad you think this is entertaining enough to keep reading in a hurry! Glad you like Stacy and Clinton too; they are so fun to write!! Thanks again!!!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 05:17 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush

This is seriously awesome! I love how you've captured Stacy and Clinton just as well as the Office gang. Nicely done! I can't wait to read the rest and really wish I wasn't running off to dinner with a friend right now. Though that will be fun too I suppose.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you like it, and that you'll enjoy the rest!! :)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2008 10:16 am Title: ACT VI: The Big Reveal

Well done with this story!  It was something totally different than what we usually read, and was just a lot of fun.  Ooo, I love the dress you chose for the reveal party.  Nice.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed the format; it is definitely a nice change from the usual brand of fic. And I am obsessed with her reveal party dress!!! She would look fantastic in it. :) Thanks again!!

Reviewer: andtheivy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 09:02 pm Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

Okay, so I love What Not to Wear, therefore I love this story. And I cannot wait for the big reveal. I think next you should write a How to Look Good Naked story. Great show.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. I've never seen How to Look Good Naked, but I bet it would be a good crossover! Who would be on it, Phyllis? ;) Thanks again!!

Reviewer: WhiteDoves Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 04:51 pm Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

An extremely detailed story. You seem to know both shows extremely well, I also love the fact that you have photo links, that makes it al the better.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Yeah, I am not ashamed to admit that I've watched a lot of WNTW... maybe a little ashamed. ;) And I'm glad the photos enhance your reading experience! They are very fun. Thanks again!!

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 01:26 pm Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

Sweet and lovely and bonus: helpful tips! I'm so excited for her reveal...not just to see Jim's reaction, but everyone's. I just love seeing her happy. Yahoo!!!

*apologizing for button, yet again*

Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you're finding this educational as well as entertaining. ;) Hopefully I'll get the big reveal chapter up soon! /gets to work on her paper...

Reviewer: Mountaineers02 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 10:16 am Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

Is it sad that I could hear Nick's voice in my head as I was reading and that I thought to myself, "Carmindy didn't product place her Crest Whitestrips?" Yeah, you know you're obsessed with WNTW and TO at the same time when... Sigh. Anyway, keep up the great work, and can't wait for the big reveal! Should the graphic on the screen when Jim is interviewed (which I'm guessing will happen) read "Pam's secret boyfriend"? lol

Author's Response: LOL!! I forgot about the Crest Whitestrips! She hasn't done that in a while though; she may have lost her contract with them... wow, talk about obsessed. ;) Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm really glad you're enjoying this so much. And yes, it

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 09:04 am Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

I've really enjoyed this story

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 08:29 am Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

I spent one day this weekend watching the WNTW marathon.  You have been able to marry the two shows perfectly here. Great job!  Cannot wait for the reveal!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you think I've done a good job of blending she shows, especially since you just had a marathon of WNTW to compare to! Thanks again!!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2008 05:42 am Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

I totally watched the marathon. Like...6 of the 15 hours. How embarrassing is that? But in my defense, I decided to write a paper on the show...we'll see how that turns out.

That being said, good chapter! I'm excited for the end. Although one thing: Why didn't Nick ask for a hug? (hee jk) He always kind of perv-ily does that with the pretty girls.



Author's Response: LOL! He does do that, doesn't he? I always thought he did that with the ones who fought him a little on how to style their hair, like to make amends at the end, but maybe it is only with the pretty ones... hmm... So glad you enjoyed it, and that you're excited for the big reveal!!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 30, 2008 09:54 pm Title: ACT V: Hair and Makeup

I did! I did! I watched the WNTW marathon, well a lot of it anyway. And I thought of this story while watching. :) You've done a great job with Stacy, Clinton, Nick and Carmindy. I tell you, it's like I'm watching an actual episode! Looking forward to the big reveal.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm really glad this reminds you of an actual episode (especially after watching a marathon of it!), because the writing process for this story is so different from anything else I've attempted to write. The hair and makeup part was especially challenging, so I'm so happy that you liked it!! Thanks again!!!

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