7 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2008 08:58 pm Title: What a mess we must clean up
"It didn’t matter that there was no immediate resolution. It didn’t matter that when he stepped back she became cold again. It didn’t matter that when he walked away he would be walking back into the arms of his girlfriend. None of it mattered because she had done everything she knew how. The rest, she knew, was simply up to him."
I really enjoyed this. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Kaystar for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2008 11:08 am Title: What a mess we must clean up
I loved this! I am so surprised u were able to fit all 5 seasons into a small story like that but you did a wonderful job :D
Author's Response: Thank you aimzers! This didn't originally start out as an overview of all five seasons...it was actually supposed to be part of another story I'm planning. I'm happy that you thought I did a decient job covering a lot of ground in so short a story!
Date: October 30, 2008 04:11 pm Title: What a mess we must clean up
Great story! I love the descriptions! Very nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks Jinxcoke! I am really looking forward to working with you to improve my writing!!!!
9 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2008 03:30 pm Title: What a mess we must clean up
Wow great fic. I think you described Pam's journey and thoughts perfectly. I especially like your explanation of her early relationship with Roy, it makes so much sense
Author's Response: Thank you Noodles for such a huge compliment! For some reason, I couldn't shake the analogy of Pam's relationship with Roy as a baby blanket. The line about Pam's mom throwing out the blanket numerous times only to have it appear again in the arms of her daughter seemed like the perfect analogy. It was all very stream-of-consciousness though - once it started coming, it wouldn't stop. Thanks for reading!