Date: November 12, 2008 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was gorgeous. I can't even pick out a favorite because they were all perfectly in character extentions of the episode itself. The could have been deleted scenes. Excellent work.
9 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2008 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well done, Steph. Great observations. I especially enjoyed Oscar and Kevin.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: November 05, 2008 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Really great job with capturing their personalities. I loves the Oscar/Kevin interaction and Phyllis's thoughts were very well written.
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2008 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
These are great. Starting with hilarious Meredith and Kelly and ending with sweetness from Kevin, Oscar, and Phyllis. Very, very much in-character from everybody, and you did a great job of explaining the otherwise inexplicable lack of Kelly in the episode.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
9 [Report This]Date: November 04, 2008 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1
This was great! Everybody was characterized so well.
(and who DOESN'T think about getting a Jim-hug? :D)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! And as characters on this show go Jim wouldn't be my first choice for a hug, but I'm kind of weird that way :)
Date: November 03, 2008 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this. You did a nice job channeling their characters, I thought. Especially liked Phyllis' vignette.
Author's Response: Thank you!