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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2011 05:13 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

I'm re reading all your stuff. Love it.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2009 07:48 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

“You only want me for my body, don’t you?” he teased.

“Yes. Now, can it,” she said as she stripped the shirt over his head and tossed it over her shoulder.


i want him for his body too.

Reviewer: Ninjam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 14, 2009 07:27 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

A little smut to make my headache better. Of course I less than 3 you over here, too! ;-)

Reviewer: nimblejack Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 08, 2008 03:28 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

You know what I love about this? All the dialogue. It was so Jim and Pam, playful and flirty and hot. Lovely.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2008 05:38 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

JAMhands, thank you for the delicious smutcake.  It left me satisfied and smiling ; ) Thrilled that the Fun Run footage inspired you so.  Hoping there's more where this came from...hint, hint...

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2008 07:13 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

Mmm...steamy! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lpy4704 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2008 06:55 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

Wow, I just recently started to read smut so I'm no expert but I thought this was great. It was so cute, while still being very hot! They were so in character and there were a lot of great lines. "Never gets old" was my fav...great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! Hearing that people enjoyed it never gets old either!

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2008 03:14 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

“Never gets old.” ....swoon. I absolutely loved this. It made for a every enjoyable lunchtime read!!!

Author's Response: Nothing like a nice ham and cheese sandwich and some smut... Thanks!

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2008 02:42 pm Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

WOW!
Perfect!
Every bit of it was adorable and hot and just plain cute!
Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2008 11:52 am Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

this was hot as hell! haha way to get a girl all worked up! AWESOME!

Author's Response: Well, that was all part of my evil plot. So glad that you liked it!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2008 11:22 am Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

That was SO hot. You're good at smut, you should definitely write more. I lovw hoe they tried to spend the night apart but couldn't manage it aw :) HOT!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I liked the idea of giving them a little space and having them both relize that they didn't want it.

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2008 09:46 am Title: Hiking Without a Hitch

Wow, not only smokin' hot, but you managed to get their voices perfect, so nice job there. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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