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Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2009 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 7 Nice Work if You Can Get It

Quite a suspenseful tale you're weaving, jazz!  I trust neither Alex nor Ryan, so can't wait to see who's responsible for the breakin.

And I love the line, "the pup who cannot be named."  That just cracked me up.  I think it's very in character that Jim would come up with a Harry Potter name.

Looking forward to the next chapter.  And didn't I tell you ... no one minds MORE chapters!



Author's Response: Jim's a closet Potter fan, I know it. I think you think you know whodunit, but at least you don't know how it all plays out. *grin* Thanks for all your help.

Reviewer: SarahPlainandTall Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21, 2009 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 7 Nice Work if You Can Get It

I love this story! I'm still not sure who's behind the break-in. It might be Ryan, but I'm also a little suspicious of Alex too. I never liked him. And by the way, promising "just one more chapter" is not very nice. I would love for this story to just keep going and going forever. Seriously, if you just continued to ramble about Jim and Pam and Voldemort in their new house I would totally readd it, even if it had nothing to do with the original plot of the story. Keep that in mind...

Author's Response: Thanks SarahPlainandTall. I felt like I was meandering a bit with all the dialogue, but I needed to line everything up for the next chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed the rambling. When I started this story I didn't think it would turn out this long, but stories have a mind of their own sometimes. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: SarahPlainandTall Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2009 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 6 She Belongs to Me

Ooh! What an exciting story! I'm really curious to see how this mystery is wrapped up. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks very much SarahPlainandTall, I'm glad you're intrigued. And thanks for taking the time to review!rnI promise to wrap it up next chapter.

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 10, 2009 05:39 am Title: Chapter 6 She Belongs to Me

Poor Jim :( And was Pam drugged? Was it Alex? dun dun dun...
Can't wait for the big reveal!

Author's Response: Only The Shadow knows... rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing, I appreciate your sticking with this one, and I'll wrap everything up in the next chapter.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2009 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 6 She Belongs to Me

wow...that Ryan is a PRICK! Jeez louise. I want him to come back to town just so they can have his scary ass arrested! Uh...poor Jim.  I can't believe you're going to continue to torture them in the next chapter...and here I thought Pam was just busy kissing it and making it better! ;-) 

I'm intrigued...bring on the finale! ;-)



Author's Response: Ryan's character still has a bit of a...journey left. Heh.rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing, I'll try to keep folks awake in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2009 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 6 She Belongs to Me

Wow and I thought things were all sorta resolved here.  I can't wait to see what you have in store for us in the next chapter!  You do write a skeevy Ryan, that's for sure.

Author's Response: They'll all get resolved in the last chapter, and Ryan will have some surprises next chapter. Thanks for the review. (I'm sure you could have made this better, but I didn't want to get in the way of Larissa's hallucinations. *hint hint*)rnrn

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2009 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 6 She Belongs to Me

Three cheers for long chapters!  You've been a busy little bee.  This was my fine consolation prize for missing House tonight (although, for the first time in eight years, I didn't curse a blue streak at a Presidential interruption).  Such a fun read--blood, screaming, unrequited love, the Halpert wit AND the Halpert treasure trail--what more could a girl want?  Looking forward to the grand conclusion (well, not happy about the story ending...you know what I mean) ; ) 



Author's Response: (sorry about the House) I wasn't wild about this chapter because I couldn't seem to get it to end, it was awfully wordy, and it just felt, I don't know...like the long hall between two rooms or something. But I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. rnrnHopefully the next chapter will be more straightforward. Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always! You're the patron saint of fanfic writers.

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2009 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 6 She Belongs to Me

I think Alex is no good. I think he drugged her.

Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, jkfan9989. Poor little Alex, he's had his heart broken and you're accusing him of drugging the woman he loves? For shame. *grin*

Reviewer: SpunkyAR Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

So it's not Alex!? I'm so confused, but I'm totally excited for more!! :)

Author's Response: Confused and excited is good. *grin* Thanks SpunkyAR!

Reviewer: drewbers Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

This is an awesome story! I can't decide if I think its Alex or not. He came across nice enough so far, but with a freaky-ness that can't be ignored!

I have to admit that at first I thought maybe someone (Alex?) had slipped something into Pam's drink. All I know is Jim needs to keep an eye on her and keep her safe!

Can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks drewbers, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and glad you're not sure. That's what makes it fun. It'll probably be a week or so before I can update - a couple of real life things to attend to - but I'll get it done as quickly as I can. I really appreciate the read and review.

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

I think I have a new theory...

Hope you update soon. :-)



Author's Response: Oh please, tell me. Because I'm not totally happy with what I have planned at this point and I could use a new theory. *grin*rnThanks for reading and reviewing, LoveFool.

Reviewer: second_drink Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

This is an intense fic and I can't wait to see where you take it.

Author's Response: Thanks second_drink, I'm trying to keep it interesting. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

Your closing sentence has left me full of anticipation!  …As he wondered what else could possibly happen to make this night more bizarre, Jim fell fast asleep.

So, if it's not Alex, who the hell is it?!?!?  I can't wait to find out.  And, yes, definitely a strained conversation between the two love-lorn men...



Author's Response: Creed. Creed did it. *grin* Thanks VB.

Reviewer: untherapy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

keep it up, jazz! Me likey the mystery stories :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement, untherapy. As you can see, I love whodunnits, too.

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

Ooh, the tension continues! I'm really glad Jim wasn't hurt too badly, and that Pam wasn't hurt at all. But I'm still concerned that you've got something else up your sleeve. You're doing a great job of keeping me guessing. Eek!

I keep going back and forth on whether I think Alex is a sick puppy, or just a lovesick puppy (VERY different things). That was definitely an odd conversation. Either way, I look forward to the resolution, whatever it is you've got in store.

Author's Response: I'm very glad you're enjoying it, and very glad that you're wondering what happens. So am I.rnThanks so much for reading and reviewing, Blanca.

Reviewer: toyrundry Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

i would love too see jim kick ryan's ass. that would make my week. lol just saying. do what your story tells you but i love when jim gets into ryan's face.

Author's Response: Ryan is fun to hate, no doubt about it, and I don't think he's disappeared quite yet. In fact, he may resurface shortly.*cue organ music* I don't think Jim's a violent guy by nature and would use it only when cornered, but who knows how this is going to go. I appreciate the read and review, toyrundry.

Reviewer: tellsomebodyit Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 10:40 am Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

Awesome! The suspense built the whole way-- and now I'm falling off my chair! Can't wait to find out what's really going on here!

Author's Response: Hang on to that chair, tellsomebodoyit. And what IS really going on here? Still not sure.rnThanks for the read and review.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 08:38 am Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

jazzfan, I love the suspense you've created.  The post-mugging interaction between Jim and Alex was great.  In fact, we were pretty sure from hearing about you that you’d show up in a cape. *snort*  Love that!  And this:  You have no idea what it’s like to be in my situation, man. Everyday.  Yeah, I suspect our boy knows a thing or two about THAT.  I'm glad this is longer than you thought.  I'm enjoying it immensely! (TWSS)  Bwahahaha!

Author's Response: Thanks NanReg. I found the fact that Pam had an admirer in New York who was faced with the same situation that Jim had been for many years quite ironic, so I wanted to work that in. And poor Jim's ego needed a little boost - Dunder Mifflin Man maybe? Okay, maybe not. Appreciate the review.rn

Reviewer: wildthing0088 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 07:43 am Title: Chapter 5 New York's Not My Home

YAY! Update! (my dorm fire alarm went off at 12:15 last night, and an 8am class this morning. You have no idea how happy this makes me)
Damn Alex is a good actor, love the Van Gogh conversation.

Author's Response: Maybe Alex is telling the truth? Sorry about your fire alarm, too cold for that nonsense. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: katydid1392 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night

Ahhh! Please keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing katydid1392. I'm a'workin' on it.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night

Jazzfan!!  Holy hell!  What a pickup after the holiday hiatus!  Do I have enough exclamation points?!?!?

Can't wait to see where you decide to go with this. 



Author's Response: Thanks VB, you're too sweet. rnrn(I can't wait to see where this goes either...)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 4 Starry Starry Night

Oh, shit! And with a dunk Pam in her unlocked room? They are so screwed.

Please keep writing, I want to know who the stalker is!

Author's Response: I'll consider "Oh Shit!" as a fine compliment in this instance. *grin*rnrnThanks for sticking with this and reading/reviewing. I'll try not to leave it hanging too long.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around

The suspense is killing me (in a good way)!

Author's Response: Great - that means I'm going my job. Thanks!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark

What the heck is up with Ryan?
And ugh, I hate Alex. He's such a brown-noser.

Reading on.

Author's Response: Ryan is a little egomanic of a jerk. But poor Alex, he just wants to help. rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: oobadnama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2009 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1 Spirit in the Dark

So I just got into this and I love it! I'm a sucker for suspense and I'm so anxious to figure out who the stalker is! And you know. For Jim to be okay. Yeah. Anyway, I hope you update this soon because it's so awesome! Seriously. :)

Author's Response: Thanks oobadnama, I'm having a really good time writing this one - I do enjoy twists. I have some time at the end of this week so I'm hoping to get the next chapter up by then. (Don't worry, I've already killed Jim off once, I wouldn't do it again - or would I?) *maniacial laughter*rnrnMany thanks for reading and reviewing.

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