10 [Report This]Date: April 03, 2009 05:20 am Title: Lilly
Amazing. Simply amazing. God it made me cry :(
10 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2008 12:44 am Title: Lilly
I really like this, no, I love it. Going into favorites.
Please write another chapter, if you have time or what have you. it's really good i'd like to see some more.
and i'm happy holly and michael are together.
7 [Report This]Date: November 15, 2008 07:39 pm Title: Lilly
So heartbreakingly sad and heartwarmingly beautiful at the same time. Nice job.
Date: November 15, 2008 12:05 pm Title: Lilly
Wow. That is so sad. and sweet. Jim is a good dad.
Date: November 15, 2008 07:07 am Title: Lilly
A very sad story. You write it so well though. Great job!
8 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 07:01 pm Title: Lilly
Those voicemails were awesome. And so like Jim to have saved them. A sad story, but also happy in the way that they truly loved each other, and made Lilly, who obviously became Jim's reason to go on. Sniff.
Date: November 12, 2008 11:36 am Title: Lilly
Note to self -- don't read sad fanfic at work. From beginning to end I was in tears. Even this story is fiilled w/ sadness and heartache, there is so much love in it.
9 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 11:36 am Title: Lilly
Despite your warning, sora, I read this anyway. I'm all teary-eyed. How nice for Lilly to be embraced by the Dunder Mifflin family. Despite the sadness, there's such sweetness. You've portrayed a lovely father-daughter relationship.
Now go to your happy place, OK?
9 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 08:54 am Title: Lilly
You made me cry. So, that means this was really good :)
The detail of the documentary being unreleased was a nice touch, as was nobody else really talking about it.
5 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 08:15 am Title: Lilly
Um, WOW. I am incredibly depressed right now. Thanks! No, I kid :) This fic definitely makes me feel better about what's actually going on in the show right now, so yay for that! I would love to read more chapters from you on this one :)
Date: November 12, 2008 05:46 am Title: Lilly
I really liked this! It's sad, but I love seeing Jim and his daughter. I'd love to see them watching the documentary and him talking to her about it - the story of Jim and Pam...
Date: November 12, 2008 04:28 am Title: Lilly
Lovely. Full of sad, happy, and just aching. But in the best way. Well written and made me cry- so you know it's awesome. Hope you find more to write about with it - otherwise great job! I love it.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 01:55 am Title: Lilly
Few fics have made me cry, but here I am at 2AM a bawling blubbering mess! Sora, this was beautiful. Perfectly tragic and sweet all at once.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 12:47 am Title: Lilly
Okay you actually had me crying lol. At first I was reluctant because I thought you were going to have it that Jim and Pam were in an unhappy marriage and I was like pfft, but then I saw she died and I was like omg noooo... but they still loved each other phew.
I love how Pam organised a present for Lily. I'd love to read about them going through the DVD's together though... so yay write more :( aw seriously you made me cry lol.
9 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2008 11:58 pm Title: Lilly
Wow that was awesome. I loved how Pam had a arranged a future birthday present for Lilly, also I loved the image of Dwight being over-protective of her.
I hope you do update with future fic of Lilly, especially of her watching the documentary.
Date: November 11, 2008 10:22 pm Title: Lilly
Oh man I NEVER do this with fics (and especially not on chapter 1!), but I have to admit, I was tearing up by the end of this. I know you said in the disclaimer that this may not be for everyone and I'll admit, it was difficult to get through just because of how sad it was, but I just think it's a beautiful piece of work. I just love how you've made Pam's legacy so powerful and beautiful for Jim, Lilly, Michael, and probably everyone else in the office. The part that was my favorite (gave me goosebumps!) were those 3 voicemails Jim had saved. Something about knowing he could hear her voice whenever he needed was comforting, I think. Wow haha I could go on and on, suffice it to say I LOVED this fic! Thank you