Reviews For Circle The Drain
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Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20, 2008 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice job on this and a realistic fleshing (eww) out of a secondary character.  Great details, and like NEJ pointed out, I love his little thoughts about Michael.

*waves frantically to Wert hiding off in corner*


Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic! This is a wonderful portrait of a character we haven't seen much of lately. It's always easy to dismiss secondary (or tertiary!) characters as one-dimensional, but here you have given Todd Packer humanity and even pathos. I actually feel sorry for the guy. And this...

it's an infomercial for something he can't make out with bleary eyes. He bets that, whatever it is, Michael owns it.

is pure genius. Yes, I completely believe Michael Scott owns everything ever shown on late night TV.

You might want to consider adding this as a response to the Sleepless challenge. I think it would fit. 

Congratulations on a fine portrait.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24, 2008 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

I would have sworn I wouldn't want to read about Todd Packer, but this was good and I'm interested to see where you're going with it.

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22, 2008 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  He reminds me of me.

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