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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 11:34 am Title: Every Breathe You Take

A happy ending for the Kevmeister! Kinda.. What a fun story this has been. Great job!



Author's Response: So glad that you liked it.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:05 am Title: Every Breathe You Take

“Sure. As long as you fire Andy for me.”

Love that line. Perfect endng.



Author's Response: It sounded like a very Michael thing to say.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 01:59 pm Title: Roxanne

Poor Kevin. So happy one minute with the thong and so sad the next.

Author's Response: I know, poor Kev.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 01:56 pm Title: Every Little Thing She Does is Magic

My heart broke for Pam when she ran into Jim and Karen. And to know they are going to be working together. Too sad.

Author's Response: Oh, I know, but maybe things will get better?

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 01:21 pm Title: Roxanne

Poor Kev

Author's Response: Yeah, I know.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:32 am Title: Roxanne

Poor Kevin! I hope chapter 5 finds a way to help him keep his dream alive.

Author's Response: Maybe...

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:12 am Title: Roxanne

Hee. Best use of zebra ever!

Author's Response: Haha!  Thanks!  It was one of the first ideas I had for the 5 Elements.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:11 am Title: Every Little Thing She Does is Magic

Oh, poor Pam! Kevin's not entirely clueless after all. Nice use of the waterfall!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:09 pm Title: Every Little Thing She Does is Magic

Kevin was so sweet to do that. Ahhh

Author's Response: I think Kevin's always had a small crush on Pam as well.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 05:17 pm Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

Tee hee.  I love Kev's POV.  Niiice!

Author's Response: Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 04:55 pm Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

Wow, everyone sounded so in character!  I loved Dwight in the beekeeper's outfit to protect him from asbestos!

Author's Response: Thanks!  The beekeeper outfit was the first thing I thought of for the glove element.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 04:11 pm Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

Oh Michael, sometimes you don't know when to stop talking.  Great chapter 2

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 04:09 pm Title: Message in a Bottle

Kevin is so funny. Great chapter 1

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 11:40 am Title: Message in a Bottle

I loved the way you worked Roy's mug shot in there and gave the reunion as the backstory for it. So perfect!  And Kevin and groupies, priceless!



Author's Response: Kevin and groupies - they seem to go hand in hand.

Reviewer: Leely Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:23 am Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

I *love* your Kevin.

"Tee-hee, he said abreast!"

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:06 am Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

Dwight had said “a breast”!

Nice!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 08:32 am Title: De Do Do Do, De Da Da Da

Ah, Michael- so sensitive. This is great!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 08:30 am Title: Message in a Bottle

Nice start. Your Kevin voice is frighteningly accurate!

Author's Response: Haha!  For the sake of the story, I'll take that as a compliment.

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 08:04 am Title: Message in a Bottle

Yay!  I love this!  Now all you need is a Zebra, some salsa, and a waterfall.  Can't wait to see them.


Author's Response: They're on their way.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 07:27 am Title: Message in a Bottle

"Groupies! Hehe" - perfect last line for Kevin! Cool idea, can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response: Ha!  Thanks!

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 06:57 am Title: Message in a Bottle

Oh, this is a GREAT story! Love it so far. Glad that Kevin's band got a gig afterall! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 06:30 am Title: Message in a Bottle

This is a very good idea!  I am looking forward to reading more of it!

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 05:15 am Title: Message in a Bottle

Wow, you really tapped into Kevin's head and that's impressive and scary. So funny. Loved the way you worked in bits of the story too - Roy's DUI mug shot, the wedding that wasn't, Kevin's infantile fantasy about the infamous kiss (as reported by Kelly - perfect!) What a treat!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review, Colette!

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