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Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aw! So sad, and yet kind of gives a sense of warmth. Because even though I think they're meant to be together, he definitely does have the strength of character to be okay if they can't be, and this was a beautiful way of showing that.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Yes, I think they are meant to be together, as well.  I just got really impatient and annoyed with Pam:)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh that was so heartbreakingly sad but I loved the last line. And Bitterpill - I agree 100% with your author's notes. 

Author's Response: Thanks very much!!  Oh, Pam.  Why does she do this to us(and him)??? 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1

How sad. I want to hug Jim

Author's Response: Hee!  Yes, so do I.  Thanks for reviewing:)

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:44 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm at the same place you are with Pam-so I thought this was great. Lovely parallel to his 12-year-old self and the Jim/Pam conversation was such a sad, sad moment but hopeful at the end for Jim.

In the episode I can really see Jim hearing about Pam's date as a turning point for him, so I thought this was spot-on.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I am a huge JAM fan, and want them back together NOW, but my heart just broke(again)for Jim in this episode.  Thanks for the review:)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like this. Nice parallel with Jim's 12-yr-old self. I love the ambiguity at the end of this line:

The tears were forming and his hands started shaking and he knew he had to end this now.



Author's Response: High praise from one of my favorites!!  Thank you so much:)  Yeah, it was time(in my mind)for Jim to say goodbye for good. 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 08:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Ouch. This is very well done and I want to be happy for strong, moving-on Jim, but I can't because I don't want him to move on without her. I love stories that twist me up like this- brava!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Ouch, indeed.  I don't like the idea of Jim moving on without her either(trust me!), but he was just so sad and I needed him to make a clean break.  Thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 07:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Jim!

I'm mad at Pam too, so thanks for writing this.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!  Silly Pam.  She's just driving me crazy.

Reviewer: Willow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 06:36 am Title: Chapter 1

This is heart breaking but beautiful.  Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!!!  And reviewing!!  I really appreciate it:)

Reviewer: kath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 05:15 am Title: Chapter 1

I liked that. For some reason I am a sucker for Jim crying.  Aw.  And "Scott Crane"? Was that a nod to "Jonathan" by any chance.  "SCOTT foley" and "noah CRANE"?

Author's Response:

YES!!!!  That was a nod to our dear Scott:)  Thanks so much for reading(and reviewing)!!

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my. Now you went and broke my heart again. What a lovely, sad, moment. And the precedent of Jim standing up to the 'enemy' is really intriguing and original. Thanks for this!

Author's Response:

Thank YOU so much!!!  I appreciate the support from you, because I admire your work so much.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Jim.  I can't believe Pam, either.  I mean, Kelly's got to be persistent, but...come on!  You've got a chance at Jim Halpert!

Author's Response:

I know!!!  Good Lord, does it get better than Jim???  NO!!  Thanks for reading and reviewing:)

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