Date: January 09, 2009 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. I love seeing how smitten Jim is with her and doesn't care that she has two kids. Curious to see how things fell apart with Roy, but I hope she and Jim don't have too many roadblocks to get together.
Date: December 30, 2008 07:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Really nice chapter. I like when Michale has to interact with kids. Regarding Roy, I wouldn't mind getting to here what happened from Pam's POV and then maybe having Roy enter. It's your story and you tell it however you want though.
Date: December 30, 2008 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2
Jim to the rescue! Another nice chapter. I do think it's still too early to bring Roy back though. You should let Jim and Pam get settled in their relationship (friendship, or romantic) first. Just so you have him in their lives in some way, you know? Anyway, just my thoughts. Although I'm sure I'll enjoy this no matter the direction you take :)
Looking forward to more!