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Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2009 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a truly gorgeous story :)

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2009 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I remember hearing that spoiler that this is exactly what I was thinking. You wrote this scenario beautifully, and I love the way you captured Jim in writing his reaction. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: banana slings Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 01, 2009 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

ahhh this is so perfectly *them*, and I loved it!!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2009 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so sweet. I found myself tear up when Pam found out she wasn't pregnant...and again while reading the last line. Just lovely.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2009 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

ooh, nice fic (:

I originally thought this might be the 'shocker', but then again.

I heard from somewhere else *spoiler* *spoiler* *spoiler* *spoiler* *spoiler* *spoiler* *spoiler*

that it has something to do with her dad, nothing bad thoughhh.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2009 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1

What a sweet, gentle, and in character possible day in the lives of Jim and Pam. Well done. I especially liked when he instinctively places his hand on her belly, connecting somehow.

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2009 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story. Very well done and in character :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2009 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1

yanana, this was so sweet, full of such lovely imagery.  I think this was my favorite:  In the beginning, when the both of you were new, this had been an exciting part of the day. It had been your favorite, and every movement between your skin and his ignited something that hadn't been touched in so long. Now it's comforting, promising and complete. It's still your favorite part of the day.

I don't know where all this inspiration is coming, but I'm loving it!  You're making me greedy :)

 

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2009 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was amazing. I really hope something like this happens. I was so praying she was, because the way Jim took it was just so beautifully HIM, you know? He'd make everything better, god, they need to have a baby lol.

Great job, I freaking loved it.

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