10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2011 08:16 pm Title: Absolutely
I forgot how much I adore your fics :(
8 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2009 08:01 pm Title: Absolutely
"When they open at last, you smile, knowing that was simply the first in the dozens of kisses to be shared that night. One of the hundreds you will beg, steal, borrow, invite and entice over the next few days. One of the thousands that you will happily give to him that month and the month after that. One of the millions that you have planned over the course of the next fifty or sixty years"
This was so beautifully romantic. I loved it.
Date: January 25, 2009 12:59 am Title: Absolutely
that was quite gorgeous. Thank you for that peak into what we're missing right now. Much appreciated!
Date: January 24, 2009 03:12 pm Title: Absolutely
That was a brilliant oneshot! You got into Pam's head perfectly! Thank you so much for writing, JAMhands!
10 [Report This]Date: January 24, 2009 06:59 am Title: Absolutely
yeah, what's with this jim/pam interaction hiatus?? it's driving me insane.
that is exactly why i'm on here reading superb stories like this one!! kudos!
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2009 07:59 pm Title: Absolutely
Jesus woman, that was amazing. Like seriously was so beautiful and perfect. I did seriously laugh at Jim wanting to put ‘Be there or be square’ to the invitations, that was freaking hilarious lol.
I hope you continue writing more like this, cos wowzers :)
Date: January 23, 2009 07:50 pm Title: Absolutely
Lovely job. The calm quiet certainty of their love despite each other's faults, the fact that they always put each other first, the peacefulness of them sharing time together, all perfectly written.
8 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2009 06:11 pm Title: Absolutely
This was really lovely. I've been missing them too. Sigh.
Date: January 23, 2009 03:18 pm Title: Absolutely
Hee. engagement Bizarro World. So true. I'm also holding onto hope that real plans for the wedding have been made, but they don't talk about them in the office, partially because of Andy and partially to keep their wedding to themselves for as long as they can. And because they have big binders and lists and swatches all over the coffee table that sits on the groovy orange shag carpeting. In their house.
Sweet and delicious, JAMhands.
Date: January 23, 2009 07:47 am Title: Absolutely
There really aren't any words for how gorgeous this is. You managed to pull me right into this scene, until I could feel exactly that calm certainty that Pam exudes in this. Just gorgeous :)
9 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2009 06:55 am Title: Absolutely
This was a joy to read, JAMhands. I really appreciate your attention to detail-- pink chenille clad toes, quiet plans, whispered late at night as they lay in a morass of tangled limbs and intertwined fingers--just lovely. This made me smile: He wanted to add the words ‘Be there or be square’ to the invitations. You had to put your foot down on that one. Perfectly in character. Their quiet wedding plans are just as I imagine (can't wait for that, by the way). Your description of their kiss (and the details surrounding it) warms my heart. Excellent job.
10 [Report This]Date: January 22, 2009 07:25 pm Title: Absolutely
God, I loved this. It was so deep and introspective. I love the way it was written, too, it's casual and it made me melt at the same time. Can I switch places with Pam and be her in this story? I think my life would be complete. Amazing work!
Date: January 22, 2009 04:39 pm Title: Absolutely
This is really lovely & sentimental. One editorial thing, though. The paragraph that begins, "You turn your attention to the pad…" switches from second person to third. I think you wrote in third and switched, maybe missed this one paragraph?
Getting back to the good stuff … love how Pam just wants to drink him in. How he doesn't even have to look at her when he asks how long she'll stare. The progression of numbers of kisses over their lifetime in the last paragraph. Nice tone overall.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You were right about the voice. I have fixed it. Thank you for pointing it out to me!