1 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2020 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Please, please, please finish this story. I love Jim and Pam together. Don't leave us all hanging.
1 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2019 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 13
I reread this and I still hate that there's "just one more chapter" and it isn't finished. But it's well done before that (even though I'm not a huge fan of the cheating theme, it's really well done).
1 [Report This]Date: February 09, 2019 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Really a shame this doesn't have that last chapter. But it is really great and steamy as is.
1 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2018 11:29 am Title: Chapter 13
This was great, I can’t believe it was left with one chapter to go!
9 [Report This]Date: January 29, 2012 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
ohmygodohmygodohmygod please tell me that you haven't stopped updating this right before the last chapter!! This whole story has been so insanely hot, especially how Jim made Pam tell him she loved him. I NEED TO KNOW HOW THIS ENDS. skldjflskjdflkcjvlsddfw
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2010 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aack! What a great story...please finish it soon!
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2010 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 13
update? :)
Date: November 19, 2009 12:35 am Title: Chapter 12
I really like this story, but I have to ask, do you have someone beta it for you?
Author's Response: beta it? sorry! i don't quite know what that means?!
Date: November 18, 2009 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yea! Thank you for the update! This story has been sitting in my favorites collecting cobwebs for far too long. I can't wait to see how you're going to wrap this up so quickly.
Author's Response: Yeah I know! I've just completed my last year of school (I live in Australia) and so I had to put all my extra activities on hold! But now I'm free to finish this story :) Thanks for waiting!!
Date: July 11, 2009 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
What?! No more? I need to see a happy resolution to all this ... only you with your author's pen can provide that - please?
Author's Response: sorry! i've been so busy latelyrni'll get around to it sometime soon! i promise
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2009 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 12
ooooh, good one (:
Date: February 22, 2009 01:45 am Title: Chapter 6
I couldn't sleep so I thought I'd read... I think this short-circuited my brain. I did like Jim being a little angry at first about her request. On to the next chapter :) Great so far.
10 [Report This]Date: February 16, 2009 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
looooove it! can't wait to see his reaction
10 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2009 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 11
oh oh oh.
perfection (:
Date: February 15, 2009 09:59 am Title: Chapter 11
Won't post until you get some reviews? That's blackmail.
I really am enjoying this story, steamy stuff!
Date: February 15, 2009 08:00 am Title: Chapter 11
I have this funny image in my head of Pam jumping Jim and then literally jumping off when she sees Jon. Hilarous.
Date: February 15, 2009 06:05 am Title: Chapter 11
This is great. A very entertaining read! Please keep going!
10 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2009 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh, I CANNOT wait for some LOST action (:
Author's Response: haha. yeah i love lost. it was kinda difficult to find a show because i'm from australia so i had no idea what airs on a thursday night or like weeknight :P hopefully they'll watch some angst between kate/jack/sawyer ;)
Date: February 13, 2009 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
oh boy--bring on the next chapter!
Date: February 11, 2009 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
I'm sorry about your friends, I hope you're doing okay.
this chapter was really good (:
Date: February 10, 2009 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hi maddymurphy, I am reviewing for 2 reasons:
1. To let you know I have been following your story with great interest and am definitely watching to see where you will go with it!
2. I'm in Australia, so of course have been hearing about all the horrible effects of the bushfires constantly on the news, and I'm so sad to hear about your family friends - that's just unbelievably awful. My sympathies and condolences :(
Author's Response: thankyou. i really appreciate your support. i hope you weren't affected in any ways. my family friends were on the front of the age today if you saw it. Rob, Natasha Jorja and Alexia Davey.rnI just got the news that my family's holiday house is safe in Toolangi :) and that my Aunty and Uncles farm in Flowerdale is fine and that they're safe so I'm feeling a lot betterrnthanks again for your message
Date: February 07, 2009 10:30 am Title: Chapter 8
i love evil jim!
Date: February 06, 2009 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
so. good.
guhhhhh (:
8 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2009 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 8
The fanfic legend of Jon Halpert no longer exists, it's Pete and Tom :P
Either way, looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response: That's why is a fiction :P I've already written it and he's already in the other chapters so oopsies! lol thanks anyway
Date: February 06, 2009 05:24 am Title: Chapter 8
Oooh that was evil of him! But so well played.