1 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2020 11:10 am Title: knife, heart, twist
Ooooof. Dan, be good to her, please.
Date: January 31, 2009 03:06 pm Title: knife, heart, twist
I really like these simple snippits of Karen's thoughts and her realizations about Jim and Pam and their history.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to review!
Date: January 31, 2009 02:50 pm Title: knife, heart, twist
Completely believable... I agree that Karen could not have been so single minded not to notice his feelings for Pam. Great work!
Author's Response: Of course not, not when he told her up front he still has feelings for Pam. Don't get me wrong, I hate Karen with a fiery burning passion, but I don't think it was her fault she was dragged into this. It was something that was done to her, not that she did. It was nice to pick her brain.
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Date: January 31, 2009 02:49 pm Title: knife, heart, twist
This is just... there are no words. I love the style in which this is written. Really good work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like the style, too; it's different and yet very similar to my usual style. It was fun.