Date: May 02, 2009 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was beautiful. it flowed so nicely, it was like walking on clouds (cliche, i know, whatever). i wish i was pamela morgan beesly!
i would give this a twenty if i could, alas ten is the highest rating
Date: February 20, 2009 11:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Good stuff there. I would really like more. Nice balance between description & dialogue. Its a great topic that I'm sad fewer people have used. Hopefully your great use of it will inspire others to use it as well.