Date: February 27, 2009 06:37 pm Title: Booger
That was cute, my only thing is I think you wrote him too old, it would have worked much better as a four or five year old. A seven year old wouldn't get so many words wrong... having said that, I did enjoy it, and I liked hearing about Jimmy aw :)
Author's Response: You're right--thanks for catching that! I definitely wrote him too old, so I changed him to being five years old instead of 7. Keep your reviews coming, I love reading them!