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Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2009 11:15 am Title: Booger

aww... my heart just broke for 5-year-old jimmy. :o(

and i love that he named his fish "booger"

Reviewer: letsplaypirates Signed [Report This]
Date: March 02, 2009 09:10 am Title: Positive

This was beautiful. The last line? killed me.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2009 09:32 pm Title: Wedding

&& again:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwws (:

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2009 09:31 pm Title: Positive

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsss (:

that. was. lovely.

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2009 07:21 pm Title: Kiss the Girl

I LOVE IT!
aw, too cute. :]

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2009 07:16 pm Title: Kiss the Girl

oh, wow.

I love that song, I still know all the words (:

AWESOME STORY !

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: February 28, 2009 03:13 pm Title: Booger

I hope this reviews part 2, MTT is messing up. Anyway, love the idea of this whole story :)

Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2009 07:59 pm Title: Booger

Lovin' this premise :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2009 06:40 pm Title: Big Jim

Poor little Jim aw.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: February 27, 2009 06:37 pm Title: Booger

That was cute, my only thing is I think you wrote him too old, it would have worked much better as a four or five year old. A seven year old wouldn't get so many words wrong... having said that, I did enjoy it, and I liked hearing about Jimmy aw :)

Author's Response: You're right--thanks for catching that! I definitely wrote him too old, so I changed him to being five years old instead of 7. Keep your reviews coming, I love reading them!

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