Date: January 31, 2010 10:31 pm Title: The Dunder Mifflin School of Witchcraft and Papery
Awww...love this chapter (especially the HP reference.) So sweet to see the gradual fall of Jim Halpert for a certain receptionist. You wrote their flirtation and beginning of their friendship very convincing that I think this is exactly what must have happened before the camera showed up at DM-Scranton.
Also, it would be great if you can re-upload Chapter 5. Oh, and don't make us wait too long for the next chapter :D
Date: January 31, 2010 10:31 pm Title: The Decision
This is such a great idea, a story about Jim and Pam before they became JAM. The characters sound so much like their Season 1 selves so great job! Also, I love the little details that Jim first noticed about Pam (like how pretty she was when she smiled) as well as Jim having no choice but to take the DM's job offer.
Date: January 04, 2010 11:36 am Title: The Dunder Mifflin School of Witchcraft and Papery
Oh god, I love this story so much! Everyone's so great, and the last chapter had be rolling. Dwight's "BY GRIFFINDOR!" sounded in my head, and now I'm half tempted to run around saying it like a loser. :P
The slow burn of chemistry between Jim and Pam is lovely, really. Him gradually becoming enamoured with her, by little things like her attention or her compliments is just really sweet.
I really wish that you'd update soon. This is just a great story, and I'd hate to see it just sit here unfinished!!