Date: March 08, 2009 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great idea for a story, Swedge, and well executed! I enjoyed it despite the lack of storybook ending ; ) I can envision this happening. It would have made a good ending.
Author's Response: Thanks. He'll probably get a storybook ending someday with Holly. Or with Jan if it's a really scary storybook.
Date: March 08, 2009 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Michael's cluelessness comes back to haunt him. Good story, very believable.
Hank would probably stick it to Jim, too, if he got the chance.
Author's Response: I bet somewhere there's slash fic about that. Thanks for stopping by. :)
Date: March 08, 2009 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
aww, poor Michael. Though...can't help but sympathize a little bit with Hank. First, no christmas tip, then the whole thing with everyone getting locked in, PLUS Michael humiliating him over the whole chair/copier fiasco. He can't feel too great about the Scranton branch as a whole, let alone feel the need to help out Michael, of all people.
Author's Response: And to add to it, some speculate Bob Vance is running an organized crime racket right under his nose! I appreciate your taking a moment to review.
10 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2009 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
It's just as well. Michael couldn't be lucky enough to find two women who appreciate him in such a small amount of time.
It's good to see you writing, and to see an ancillary character get some attention. Plus it made me come to the fanfic site for the first time in a while.
Nice job filling in a little moment. :)Author's Response: It might be just as well for him, for all we know she might be dating Toby. Imagine how he'd take that?
7 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2009 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwwww. Poor Michael. Bit in the butt by karma.
Author's Response: As always. :) Thanks for the feedback.