Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 10, 2019 07:11 am Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

The 1 to 2 transition is great and heartwrenching. As is 4 to 5 in a different way (the great, not the heartwrenching).

Reviewer: insiliarius Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2007 04:15 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

 What an unexpectedly hot ending to something that I'd thought was going to be all angst! I love the progression of Jim's mental state.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 09:13 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

These are great! I especially love #2. "Her reaction is this:..." is just awesome. I really like your prose.

Reviewer: moofoot Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2006 10:13 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

Loved this!

First of all I love how #1 and #2 link, but it's linked in a sad way [Gods, is that the only way I can describe it?!]. I love #3, because it's a completely imaginable scenario, and it makes my head hurt to think of the number of times Jim must've been in that situation. I love #4, but in a weird way, because I don't ordinarily love bits that make Pam hate Jim, or the other way around, or bits that make my heart ache [oh, the finality of those last few lines], but this was both. Aye-aye-aye. And I love #5, because that's the perfect way to end a story. Handcuffs. *chortle*

I love tiny little details here and there, like how you kept Roy's name out of #2 'till half a sentence in, how he notes in #5 that that card is from a pack she got when she donated to a charity, the way Pam notices in #1 that he's staring at her [but not for the same reason!] but how as a whole not everything is mentioned, and some things are left to the imagination. I like these Five Ways/Five Times stories, and this is possibly one of my favourites.

Short, simple and sweet [so short that I'm certain that if I continue writing my review, it'll end up longer than your story!]. I'm looking forward to more from you!

Reviewer: Annakovsky Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 08:54 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

This is really good!

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 06:58 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

Man, i REALLY like this.  The transition between the first and second ones, that wonderfully sneaky switch of Jim having to *watch* her reaction is *great*, and "He used to rescue her from people who made her look like that." is so wonderfully painful it KILLS me.  And "loopy schoolgirl's handwriting"! 

(And if anyone ever writes Jim/Pam with handcuffs, I might die happy.)

 I hope you write more in this fandom!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 03:23 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

I loved the way 1 segued into 2. And 5 made my little shippy heart smile.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 02:17 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

I loved this "He used to rescue her from people who made her look like that.  He wonders when he became that guy". Glad they were able to move from that to the hotness of #5! 

Reviewer: Willow Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 12:20 pm Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

love it!!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 09:28 am Title: Five Times Jim Almost Wishes He and Pam Didn't Work Together

Didn't see number coming. Great job with 5 things.