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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2023 02:49 am Title: Chapter 1

A great glimpse into the combination of attraction and restraint that Jim showed towards Karen. I totally reject the idea that Jim just used her. For sure, he was wrong, but he was genuinely attracted to Karen and he genuinely liked her as a person. It's what makes the demise of their relationship so sad. I definitely caught those lustful looks that Karen gave to Jim. They were an enjoyable aspect of early Season 3. You definitely captured the fact that Karen's only major problem was not being Jim's true love.

Author's Response:

Thank you, that's exactly what I was going for (I think. It was a long time ago!). Had Jim never come back to Scranton, things might still have fallen apart for Jim & Karen, but there was just no hope for her with Pam right. there. I find myself having a lot more compassion on Karen now than I did when I was actively rooting for her to get hit by a bus to get her out of the way...ha.

 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01, 2009 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Why did I start with a Jim/Karen piece? It does explain more of their relationship, at least, how he could have done it. But the last line is true. Someone else would always define beautiful. And now he has beautiful. And maybe soon they can start making some super gorgeous cute babies.

Author's Response: I can't believe I've left this comment un-answered for almost a full year. Thank you! :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I loved the twist at the end! Lovely story and not just because it ended with thoughts of Pam. Your descriptions of Karen's strengths and traits really proved what an excellent girlfriend she would be.  (Just not for Jim.)

Author's Response: Thank you! I like Karen...she's just not Pam.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, how perfect! If people are going to start writing Jim/Karen, this is how I want it...Karen for fun, but Pam for real.

Author's Response: That's my philosophy, too. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Wren Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you almost had me crying my eyes out on that last sentence!!!

Author's Response: Oh, don't cry! I'm glad it touched you, though. Thanks!

Reviewer: girl7 Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lovely, just lovely - did not see that last line coming, so it was such a pleasant surprise.  And I also loved the line about him ignoring the feeling that he was falling....sigh.

You also do an excellent, excellen job here of really capturing the essence of what we saw of Karen last night. Totally loved this. 



Author's Response: I thought that this would be more than a sinking feeling, you know? Worse than that, somehow. I'm glad it resonated with you.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was just a perfect piece.  I like that Jim feels pulled in two directions as I would expect him to be. 

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, this was SO nice! It's true..Karen is a very pretty person, but Pam is just beautiful, insode and out.
Loved it!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm a fan of Pam. Thank you!

Reviewer: Winky Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was endearing and adorable. I love the line "Her lips quirked up a smile", because it so perfectly describes Rasheda Jones's facial expressions. Amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you. It just seemed to fit. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Leely Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh...

I just feel so bad for both of them.  Great piece!



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love this!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Supervixen Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Karen's nice enough, but... Yeah, there's the but:) Its name is Pam:) Great fic:)

Author's Response:

Pam is the but? Sounds like something Michael would say! :)  Just joking.

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw.  Really nicely done. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1

This was certainly pretty - especially the ending.  Truly lovely.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much. What a nice thing to write!

Reviewer: Pixel Anonymous 8 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, darn you.  You go and yank the rug out from under me there at the end.

I really liked it anyway. 



Author's Response:

Oh, sorry! And thank you. :)  Just the fact that I don't actively hate Karen is a triumph of casting and writing, but I have a very obsessively loyal shippy heart.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1

He ignored the feeling of falling as he asked her to dinner,...

Love that line.



Author's Response: You inerrantly pick out my own favorites. Thank you, as usual.

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 10:07 am Title: Chapter 1

thank god for mtt after last night! i really loved the last line :)



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 10:02 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow loved that. I could really feel Jim in this.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. That's a wonderful compliment.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Can I just tell you that I love you? That was perfect!



Author's Response:

You can tell me that every day and twice on Sunday, sweetie. Love you, too! I'm glad you liked it.

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