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Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12, 2017 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oh how I wish this were complete. This is very well done. It brought back a lot of memories that I prefer to keep buried but I so wanted to read more about their journey.

Reviewer: AnnaRox01 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 15, 2009 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 7

Keep going!!! I love this story!!! Don't stop now!!!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2009 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 7

first.
congratulations on your engagement! i hope your wedding is as amazing as your fanfic skills! this made my heart squee a little bit. :D

second.
i would paint it yellow. because in juno they said yellow was a gender-neutral color. :D

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2009 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 7

1. Congratulations and tell us all about your gorgeous wedding =)
2. I loved this, your descriptions are beautiful. I cannot wait for the next installment =)

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2009 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 7

great as usual! and away we go is AMAZING.. i may have gotten to meet john krasinski out of the whole deal..lol.. still an AMAZING movie!!

Reviewer: uglyscientist Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2009 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 7

i tend to stay away from anything sad/angry so i was skeptical of this one, but i'm really glad i stuck with it because it's very, very nice. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you've stayed too, uglyscientist!! :) Hope you enjoy what's to come!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2009 09:20 am Title: Chapter 6

I hope that is not the end.  I really am loving their journey.  Please keep going.

Author's Response: Definitely not the end, my friend :) Stay seated, this is going to be a much longer ride!

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

YAYYY!!!!!!!!
i love you. this fic is amazing times ten! but please don't let it end here, even though all the angst is like byebye. (:

Author's Response: Hahaha thanks JamFan! It's definitely not ending here, but be prepared for a bit more angst (since really, no pregnancy is perfect). I think you'll love where it ends up tho :)

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 6

yaya (:


Author's Response: Thanks mixedbreed :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh!  I feel all emotional. *sob*  You're killin' me.

Author's Response: Aww Nan!! No dying yet, this still has a few more places to go haha

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 06:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Lovely chapter.You are really handling a difficult subject with a lot of respect and delicacy.


Author's Response: Thanks albie :) Like I said earlier, this has a special place in my heart since I'm so close with my coworker, and I would never want to make this into something that it's not! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: aabchamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 05:01 am Title: Chapter 6

I'm really enjoying this story. It's well-written, moving and heartfelt. Good job. :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the review aabchamp!! :)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2009 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh I liked that a lot. So happy these two are getting some happiness and I loved the juxtaposition of it being such a dreary day...and then the brightest news. ::sigh::

Author's Response: Thanks LoveFool!!rnrnReally, your reviews mean SO much! Esp since your work is incredible, it's humbling knowing you read my little ones :)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2009 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 5

he's going to regret that whole car thing.

but AWWWWW! is pretty much all i can say...wow. (:

Author's Response: Hahaha, yeah, I'm thinking that Jim is going to be probably the most relaxed daddy ever - so when that kid turns 16, there's going to be a car in the driveway with a big red bow on it haharnrnThanks for reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2009 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

ahhhhhhh (:


Author's Response: Thanks Mixedbreed :) hehe

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2009 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 5

Okay, amazing. That was so beautiful and perfect. I can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: Thanks Hannah!! :) An update isn't too far away - get pumped!!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2009 11:41 am Title: Chapter 5

So touching.  May I feel cautiously optimistic? 



Author's Response: You may, Nan. You may.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2009 08:20 am Title: Chapter 5

Ooooo!  I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the news!

The last scene where Jim is talking to Pam's stomach is so tender and heartbreaking.  Well done.



Author's Response: Thanks Beeswax!! I'm in the process of writing ch. 6, so hopefully you won't be on the edge of your seat for too long :)

Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2009 10:00 am Title: Chapter 4

Alright, I'm letting you have it. Are you ready? Are you sure? Okay....It's totally awesome and I love it! Love, love this story! Yep, that's all. :D

Author's Response: Haha thanks Liv - glad you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2009 06:57 am Title: Chapter 4

*Heavy sigh* So. Sad.  Really good though, stjoe.  Glad Jim finally shared the sad news.  Looking forward to the eventual fluff.

Author's Response: Thanks Nan... Coworker said that the day her hubby told his mother was one of the worst days of her life... since it was like they were finally admitting that they had problems that they couldn't fix by themselves. Thankfully, bad things can lead to good things, which should be the further chapters!!

Reviewer: kaat Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2009 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1

this is so sad and so beautiful! i can't wait to see what happens - i need my fluffy ending :]

Author's Response: Thanks kaat!! I'm sure you'll enjoy this one, despite the angst! :)

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2009 05:40 am Title: Chapter 4

I thought the chapter was really well written, my only complaint is that i think everyone's crying a weeee bit too much. I know this is an emotional thing, but it's sort of making Pam look like a really weak woman, which she's not, but this is a hard thing to go through. She's just become somewhat 'annoying' if you know what i mean. Other than that, keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Eh, to each his own, ya know? I guess I was looking at it like, poor Pam feels like a failure, and being questioned about something so personal that she has no control over, that she wants SO badly, made her break. And I can see Larissa crying because personally, if I'd known I was pushing for something that someone else was trying so unsuccessfully for, I'd feel like a complete and utter jerk. Hence the tears. I don't think it makes them look weak... But again, to each their own. Thanks for reading and reviewing constructively - I love it! :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2009 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 4

Awwwww Larissa you didn't know:(:(:(

Loving this, loving the whole invitro option or even adoption. I can see Jim being SO up for that aw!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Hannah! I can see him totally up for doing anything to get a baby in his arms... And it makes me swoon ::bats eyelashes::

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2009 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 3

Awwwwwwww I knew Jim would break, the poor thing being so strong for Pam, but he's in pain too :(

So good, I really love your writing style!

Author's Response: Oh Hannah, you make me blush :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2009 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love how you have them both blame themselves. So brilliantly written. I want to smoosh them both :(

Author's Response: Awesome review Hannah, lol.. I want to smoosh them both myself... and make them TALK to one another!

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