Reviews For First glimmer
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Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 02:21 pm Title: Sunday

awesome (:

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 11:54 am Title: Sunday

greengarnets, this fic?  Glorious, from start to finish.  I really, really loved it.  It just shows that there are endless ways to tell a story, always new details to learn.  Excellent job.  ::adds to favorites::

Reviewer: Anjou Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2009 07:04 am Title: Thursday

I have to admit beta bias from the get-go, but I really enjoyed this look at the early part of Jim and Pam's happiness. The whole sequence that begins once Pam and Jim get to her place is just lovely and achingly intimate. Great first story -- now keep going!

Reviewer: OliverJAMs Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2009 07:50 pm Title: Thursday

Great first story!

Reviewer: stjoespirit04 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2009 04:24 pm Title: Sunday

Finally he said, wonderingly, “I don’t think I’ve ever felt this happy before.”

Ugh, that was great.

Reviewer: stjoespirit04 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2009 04:10 pm Title: Thursday

Texting back x's and o's is quite possibly one of the cutest things I've read. Loved it!

Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2009 08:01 am Title: Sunday

Really well written and lovely :)
Congrats on your first fic!

Reviewer: Ash86 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2009 07:40 am Title: Thursday

A great first story [b]greengarnets[b]. I thought you
captured the hope and trepidation they would have
both had at the beginning of their relationship really well. Loved the idea of Michael's coming back drinks and Jim teasing Pam about mixing up movies!

Looking forward to reading more from you. :)

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