Date: August 18, 2009 11:45 am Title: New Boss: All Flowers in Time Bend Towards the Sun by: bashert
Oh how perfect! I think this is exactly the brand of comfort Pam would give Jim. Perfectly in character! Well done.
Date: August 17, 2009 08:24 pm Title: Two Weeks: I Walked Right Out of the Machinery by: callisto
You conveyed both Pam and Jim's emotions so beautifully. Loved it :)
Date: August 17, 2009 02:48 pm Title: Two Weeks: I Walked Right Out of the Machinery by: callisto
I loved this chapter! I like the things you have Jim find in Pam's desk. And it's wonderful that you have him build up both Michael and Pam in his pep talk. The things he points out are realistic, so it's believable for Pam.
Date: August 17, 2009 01:38 pm Title: Two Weeks: I Walked Right Out of the Machinery by: callisto
Oh, the nicely drawn parallel of them both worrying. How beautiful that by now, that's the worse thing we have to worry about. There is a really soft, gentle tone throughout this that is really lovely. Great job contributing to a great project!
Date: August 17, 2009 12:13 pm Title: Weight Loss: Someone Just a Little More Funky by sophia_helix
This is so sweet - and a great version of what might have happened that night. I loved Jim's travels through Pam's things in her desk, complete with mementos from before she was supposed to care. And I love that Pam worries, Jim worries that Pam worries, and neither of them admits it to the other.
10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2009 11:06 am Title: Two Weeks: I Walked Right Out of the Machinery by: callisto
Callisto, you had me at Solsbury Hill :) I will have that song happily stuck in my head for the rest of the day. One month to go until S6, and what better way to mark the occasion than a lovely fic from you.
I've come to expect nothing less than brilliance from you, my dear. I dare any sceptics to read one of your fics and tell me that all is not well in Jamville. Your Jim and Pam are so beautifully in sync. My most favorite element of many favorite elements in this fic is that Pam has a transcript of their IM conversations. I found myself hoping that you had actually attached it. Greedy, aren't I? : D
In the event that I haven't been appreciative enough, thank you so very much for being part of this summer project. Proud to say that I knew you when ; ) Hoping you continue to be inspired.
Date: August 17, 2009 11:02 am Title: Two Weeks: I Walked Right Out of the Machinery by: callisto
Very cute, love the little McDonalds joke, and the IM conversation was adorable :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2009 04:14 pm Title: New Boss: All Flowers in Time Bend Towards the Sun by: bashert
Ah, New Boss--an ep so cringe-worthy, just reading about Charles makes me hate him even more. It hurts my heart to think of Jim so upset. Nice to see the tables turned and Pam taking care of Jim. Comfort foods for dinner would surely turn his frown upside down :) You captured Jim's feeling of anxiety so well, bashert, as I knew you would. Your fics are always so consistently good.
Date: August 15, 2009 04:00 pm Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. Lovefool, my girl, you hit it out of the park. This was: (a) so perfectly in character; (b) so adorable; and, (c) so awesome. Did I say this was awesome? Really happy you're part of this project :)
Date: August 15, 2009 03:51 pm Title: Blood Drive: You're My Favorite Work of Art by Blanca
Blanca, this was so worth the wait. I could have kept reading! The comparisons of each Valentine's Day was a perfect idea for a story on this ep. As much as I love the idea of our favorite couple getting nasty in a public restroom, I much prefer the idea of a secure, lasting love. Excellent job.
Date: August 14, 2009 05:06 pm Title: New Boss: All Flowers in Time Bend Towards the Sun by: bashert
haha. loved it, especially the last line =]
and this reminded me of why i do indeed hate Charles Minor
Date: August 14, 2009 10:24 am Title: Blood Drive: You're My Favorite Work of Art by Blanca
Very skillful use of time-shifting to slowly illuminate your main point. They are perfectly matched and exactly where they need to be. Love it. A wonderful Valentine to JAM fans!
Date: August 14, 2009 10:22 am Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
Very cute, light tone for something that is essentially serious- her confession about how much he has meant to her all along.
Date: August 14, 2009 10:21 am Title: New Boss: All Flowers in Time Bend Towards the Sun by: bashert
I love the insight that Jim's not used to not being beloved. This is very nicely done.
Date: August 14, 2009 06:25 am Title: Blood Drive: You're My Favorite Work of Art by Blanca
:) beautiful. great, great description, I just love the way you wrote them
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2009 08:55 pm Title: New Boss: All Flowers in Time Bend Towards the Sun by: bashert
I love how supportive Pam is. It's so often that we get to see Jim as the supportive one, always taking care of Pam, it's nice to see her return the favor.
I really loved the back and forth between the present and what had happened during the day. Poor Jim. It was a great prank, until Charles went and ruined it.
Great job!
Date: August 13, 2009 01:50 pm Title: New Boss: All Flowers in Time Bend Towards the Sun by: bashert
nice concluding line there - and i love how sweet and loving pam was towards jim in this chapter, very nicely done! i was slightly confused how (i think...) the story went back and forth between the work day and the evening. is that right??? anyway great chapter, and just wanted to let all of you tesserae authors know i love this story. by the way, what does tesserae mean, and what's the significance? just wondering.
Date: August 12, 2009 06:08 am Title: Blood Drive: You're My Favorite Work of Art by Blanca
"Stay, little valentine...stay...." One of the most beautiful songs ever written and very appropriate for this story.
This was a lovely exploration of their Valentine's history, and the ending was perfect. (I think you wrote a very interesting twist about the Karen VDay) Proving again that Jim and Pam just plain fit.
Date: August 12, 2009 06:01 am Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
Nobody writes the playful dynamic between these two better than you. Awesome.
Date: August 11, 2009 07:53 pm Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
Completely loving this series. If the show had been like this for real, perhaps I wouldn't be getting a divorce from it. Lovely work!
Date: August 11, 2009 07:51 pm Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
Completely loving this series. If the show had been like this for real, perhaps I wouldn't be getting a divorce from it. Lovely work!
Date: August 11, 2009 07:14 pm Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
I love do-overs. And 'Easy Beesly' is hilarious!
Date: August 11, 2009 06:42 pm Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
aw .cute chapter. love the end =]
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2009 06:34 pm Title: Golden Ticket: A Respectful Distance by: LoveFool
Easy Beesly. Hee Hee.
I have been loving this entire series and this one was definitely no exception. It's so so sweet, I love it! And poor Jim - he's just as gullible as me sometimes :)
Date: August 11, 2009 05:16 pm Title: Blood Drive: You're My Favorite Work of Art by Blanca
Oh Blanca...I knew this would be worth the wait. This title is my favorite line from My Funny Valentine, btw. This piece was beautiful...the juxtaposition of not only their relationship with the Vances, but their relationships with other people, and even what their relationship had once been with each other. I love that quiet comfortable - but ABSOLUTE love that does not have to be showy...this was wonderful.