Date: August 06, 2009 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAAAAAWESOME!!! one thing...... i didn't see anything about them turning off the water. that's going to be one hell of a water bill...
Date: June 25, 2009 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1
This is all kinds of sexy, not just cause of the actual (and most effective) smut, but because it's a great glimpse of their dynamic. I love how it ends with him murmuring 'stupid jokes' in her ear as the fall asleep. Perfect. I also think make-up tub sex should be a new genre of fic all to itself ;-)
Date: June 24, 2009 04:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, I was even starting to breathe a little heavy! Verrrry nice!
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2009 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just...WOW!! lol So awesome!
Date: June 23, 2009 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was great steam. Whew.
Date: June 23, 2009 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow!! That's some hot stuff! But really, it was well written and beautiful. Great job!
Date: June 23, 2009 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Shew Lawdy! *fans self* They say water is a symbol of sexuality in dreams. They appear to be right. So, are they gonna have to name the kid "Brooke" or "River"? Well done smuff, and another good conception fic.
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2009 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Hot Hot Hot - I am so glad you had no internet and HAD to write this delicious story for us eeeeeeeeeep :)
Date: June 23, 2009 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that was the classiest, best smut
I'd ever taken the time to read. really great job my favorite part was when you described jims tips of his hair getting damp...for some reason I just really liked that. great job!!!
10 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2009 05:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Yanana! Just saw your post in the forum and was about to give you a little nudge in the direction of Two. Wisely, I checked the archive first and was rewarded with this gorgeous bit of smuff. Wow. It's so sexy and passionate and plenty, plenty hot. Great job (as always).