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Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2009 08:37 am Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima

Oh so sweet, and real to the character! Although really, who hasn't had a crush on Jim at some point:) Phyllis has always been a favorite of mine and I'm so glad that she's really happy. Please do Creed next, There's just so many scary possibilities!

Author's Response: Hahaha I definitely have had a crush on Jim! I think I will do Creed... I was going to do him for Chapter 2, but then I went with Jim. Creed is coming!

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2009 08:31 am Title: Jim, an anti-footballer

Just when you think it's impossible to be anymore in love with Jim Halpert, someone writes a backstory like this. It's probably a little crazy to care about fictional people,but at least I'm among other crazy people on this site:) I was going to say the bit about avoiding football is exactly how Jim's mind works, but the whole thing is so completely in character. Any chance your planning to do the whole office?

Author's Response: Thank you! I was worried the football part made him sound too bitter, so I'm glad you thought it was in character! I am definitely going to do the entire office :)

Reviewer: ItsOnlyMeredith Signed [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2009 06:55 am Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima

Ok, I am LOVING this concept. Nicely done. Keep 'em coming :)

Author's Response: Thanks!! The idea of telling secrets and quirks is from Fanfiction.Net, where there are tons of them!

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2009 12:40 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima

so awesome. I think you've really captured Phyllis.

Author's Response: Awww thanks!! Not capturing the character was what I was most worried about while I was writing, so I'm so glad you think so.

Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2009 09:15 pm Title: Phyllis, a less urban Aunt Jemima

Aw! Very cute!
I can't wait for your analysis's on the others!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm not quite sure who I'll do next. I'm thinking Creed...

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