Date: August 30, 2009 10:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Are my hands supposed to be smooth and delicate? One of my kids I work with told me yesterday I needed loction.
I think he could rake the yard before getting married. Actually, at my friends wedding, her house was still being built, so the day before/morning of her wedding, we were still running around trying to put doors on, floors in, and trying to decorate. So raking isn't out of the question.
Happy wedding fluff!
Author's Response: Haha, I don't know how I missed this review, but it cracked me up. "I think he could rake the yard before getting married." Assume they have to drive up to Niagara, okay? ;)
Date: August 04, 2009 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED THIS. As an aside -- I had no idea cable companies could do that!...ok, back to the review -- What a delicious little surprise that they were planning on getting married the next day, and I love the idea of Pam being so enamored with Jim's hands. Good stuff! Glad to have you back.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, LoveFool. =) And, ugh, those damn cable companies... more like they're doing it on behalf of NBC, but still. Sigh! At least I got all the episodes I needed downloaded before I was cut off. Oops, hope they don't see that. ;)
Date: August 04, 2009 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done, and this line nearly did me in: "When he whispered again, his voice was like polished rocks." Guh.
Author's Response: thanks for the review, jazzfan. =)
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2009 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uber cute :)
Author's Response: thanks! =)
Date: August 04, 2009 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
i loved this story! you wrote it so perfectly, and had some great lines in there. i just loved how it seemed as though jim and pam were the only two people in the world, it was so sweet! great job with it, and i'd keep going with it, if i were you, this is perfect angle!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! =) I think this one needs to be a oneshot, I can't imagine writing two WIPs at a time. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2009 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Wait, they cut off your internet for downloading episodes, seriously? Or are you just joking? Because that's crazy! LOL
Such a sweet, lovely, fluffy story. :)
Author's Response: Oh, no, I'm completely serious! We all download music and stuff in our house and everything, and have for years, but when we got the notice that mentioned NBC Universal, I figured I was probably the one to blame. ;) rnrnThanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2009 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Yanana! I've missed you so much. Glad you're back :) This was just luscious, this little wisp in particular: When he rolled up his shirt sleeves, fiddled with his tie, and poured his heart out to her. That says so much. It's the essence of Jim. Please stay on the right side of the law, ok? Can't have you disappearing again! ; )
Author's Response: Hey there, NanReg! I just saw your email about two seconds ago looking for me, haha. I'm glad to be back, too. Thanks for the review! I guess I'll have to behave with the episodes... To be fair, I bought all of season five fair and square from iTunes, I just needed the other four seasons, you know. ::whistles::