Date: September 11, 2009 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting analogy. Karen doesn't hold the cement together though. Only hope and promises of more do.
Author's Response: Thank you, EmilyHalpert. I'm so glad to see your review. I'm not sure if I've reviewed any of your writings, but I freakin love them all. :)
Date: August 09, 2009 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! I like this inanimate object thing. Good work! More please?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Dwangie! rnI was thinking about writing a second part, but it didnt feel right. So that's all I got for this one, sorry. rnI was really iffy about using an inanimate object, I felt like I didnt give it a big enough part in the story. You made me feel better! :)rn