Date: August 10, 2009 04:56 pm Title: mixed
We must have read the same spoilers, this fits with what I've heard. Oooh I'm so excited for September! Oh yeah the story is great:) I just know one of them is going to cry for real during the vows, and considering the past I'm going to say it'll be Jim!
Date: August 09, 2009 10:41 pm Title: mixed
Michael throws a fistful of rice at us just as we say I do.
That cracked me up. The rest made me swoon. Bravo!
Author's Response: haha...the michael line was an impulse add. i decided i couldn't get by without mentioning him :)
Date: August 09, 2009 10:10 pm Title: mixed
GORGEOUS. I thought everything about this worked. Big or small, tons of people or tiny amount of people, the details don't matter...there was true love written into every word of this and that's Jim and Pam. No matter the scenario, all they really see is each other and I can't imagine that Jim won't be cataloguing every detail of the moment. GORGEOUS.
Author's Response: lovefool, i just have to say that getting reviews from you make my day. your writing is my favorite and compliments like that coming from you mean soooo much! :) i'm glad you liked it!
Date: August 09, 2009 09:28 pm Title: mixed
If I'm going to be honest about this, I felt conflicted. On one hand, the descriptions were beautiful, it's the wedding I'd WANT them to have. But let's be honest for just a minute...do I really think that's how it's going to go? Not really.. it's too perfect, and Jim and Pam..well, their not perfect? I know not every story isn't for every one, but I did enjoy the details, I just felt like it was a bit of a stretch.
Author's Response: thanks for the constructive criticism, it really is always appriciated! :) i'll take that into account next time i'm writing. i understand what you mean about it being too perfect - and obviously that's not how it's going to go. i just like to write things the way i WISH would happen and not worry about the reality! thanks for reading!