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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2020 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1

I mean... it's a vignette about JAM bonding over a shared love of penguins. How much better can you get?

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2009 10:23 am Title: Chapter 1

Is it sad that I started liking penguins a lot more after Jim had one in ES? Seriously. Penguins weren't big either way on my list, but then... it warped my brain, and yeah... not its all PENGUINS!

Author's Response: Haha, it's not sad at all. Then again, I am all about some adorable, eccentrically random animal pimpage. Any means of spreading the zoological love is alright in my book. Plus, that penguin statue is pretty awesome.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2009 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

My heart broke just like Jim's did as I read the last part.  What a sweet, moving story.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 20, 2009 07:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent to hear from you again so soon, shortlatte!  This was really touching and sweet.  Of course, I'm thinking about that deleted scene from E-Mail Surveillance with the penguin in Jim's room : D  I love your descriptions--cotton candy puffs, crystal beads like snowflakes--so pretty. 

This paragraph broke my heart:  Her words rolled over him as he focused on the tall one in the back, the one standing a little apart from the group, the way he normally focused on the blinking cursor of an open, blank email document whenever his emotions overwhelmed him. It happened sometimes after lunchtime, after shared looks and private laughs were interrupted by Roy, calling her babe, asking questions without listening to her answers. He watched the bird slowly wobble toward the group and silently cursed Roy for invading the penguin house too. He didn’t even need to be in town for his presence to corrode.  Boy, that is just perfect.  Keep it up!

Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2009 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was so beautiful. LOVELY job!! I so look forward to reading more of your stuff :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2009 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute. I'm a huge fan of Jim and Pam AND Penguins, so I appreciate the love. LOve the connection with Roy only liking the big animals :)

Reviewer: mr Malegos Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2009 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

As an avid fan of The Office (and penguins), I truly believe that you managed to capture the simple quirkiness of everyday life that the show so often depicts. Your imagery and portrayal of emotion is very tangible and accurate. From the detail of Jim's smirking expression to Pam's tentative yet genuine speech, your writing flows so naturally that reading it feels effortless.

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2009 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

so. so so so cute. I really, really liked this. the simpleness of this story combined with the cuteness of penguins.. this just made me smile and feel like a little girl again

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2009 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

so. so so so cute. I really, really liked this. the simpleness of this story combined with the cuteness of penguins.. this just made me smile and feel like a little girl again

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