Date: November 03, 2009 07:45 pm Title: What the...?!?
I knew there was something a little off kilter about Erin! Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you, jslasb! Erin is quite puzzling to me & probably the character that we know the least about so it's convenient for me to make her the villain :D
Date: November 02, 2009 05:09 pm Title: The Murderer Revealed
Yikes. Are we going to find out how Toby made Erin an orphan?
Author's Response: No...I'm sorry. That's it. :D Kidding! You will definitely find out in the next chapter. Thanks for continuing to read this little story, jazzfan!
Date: November 02, 2009 08:50 am Title: The Murderer Revealed
Is it wrong that I was kinda hoping something would happen to Pam/and or Jim (something mild!) just so I could see some "awww" moments. LMAO something is so wrong with me! haha loving this story.
Author's Response: Yes, Liv...there's something wrong with you...the fact that you're too awesome ;o) I wanted to do a non-Jam story for once so there aren't that many moments between them. Thanks so much for continuing to read and review this story, my dear!
Date: October 31, 2009 09:39 pm Title: The Murderer Revealed
What?! I did not see that coming! I knew there was more to Ms. Too-Nice-To-Everyone. lol
Author's Response: Lol!! You're right, no one can be that nice all the time! Thanks, Andastainonmyshirt!
Date: October 30, 2009 08:36 pm Title: Toby's Secret
Ah! I hate this waiting you're making us go through! More, please. Quickly!
Author's Response: I swear...it's not on purpose. I've already submitted the next chapter yesterday & still waiting for its approval. Sorry, Andastainonmyshirt! Also, thank you for taking an interest in this story! :o)
Date: September 10, 2009 06:15 am Title: A non-secret....
“Shut up, temp! You didn’t see anything of the sort.” Dwight replied. Forgot to tell you that that cracks me up every time : D I'm going to go make some popcorn. Tell your beta to get off her ass and take care of the next chapter!
Author's Response: Funny you mentioned that since I was about to crack open the whip ;o) But as always, my super awesome beta came through with a nice surprise in my inbox! So...I left her a present (not the Todd Packer variety, lol) in her inbox as well. Hope she'll enjoy it! Also...thanks so much, darling!
Date: September 04, 2009 03:19 am Title: What the...?!?
This is really fun! And I love that you've settled the Phyliis "one night stand" question that's sort of just lingered in the background of this show for way too long now! Way to go! Anxiously awaiting the next "clue".
Author's Response: *high five* I knew I wasn't the only one who was bugged by Phyllis' "one night stand" comment that was never addressed again on the show so I figured, why not Toby? I mean, if I'm going to kill off the guy, might as well let him have some fun first ;o) Thank you!
Date: September 03, 2009 07:26 pm Title: That's a motive?
The whole office hung on to her every word. “I….I had a one night-stand with Toby! And he took pictures of us without me knowing!”
Say what?!? OMG. I have no idea where this is going now.
Author's Response: Heeee....I'm totally milking this alternate universe thing for all its worth. Your comments made me so happy, jazzfan! I wouldn't want to be predictable so I'm glad you're stumped....for now :D
Date: September 03, 2009 06:28 am Title: Could it be.....?
"I have the memory of ten elephants combined." Ahh! I laughed so hard at that line. I'm enjoying this story so much, the characters are really starting to come alive. More please : )
Author's Response: Awww....thanks, shortlatte, for letting me know how much you're enjoying this story! I'm so happy you think the characters are coming alive (except Toby cuz he's dead ;o) Hopefully the rest won't disappoint :D
Date: September 02, 2009 04:43 pm Title: Could it be.....?
Coming in a little late here- Just got a chance to read. What a great story idea, bkwrm! It's off to a really nice start. Very intriguing! Poor Toby. But who did it?! Dun dun dun... Looking forward to more :) -spencer
Author's Response: *squeee* Thank you so very much, spencer, aka Totally Awesome Person Who Gave Us Awesome JF/TO News ;o) I'm so happy you're liking the story so far! Poor Toby indeed. But the real game killed him off first so I'm just going off of that :D Thanks again!
Date: September 02, 2009 02:29 pm Title: Could it be.....?
Holy crrrooooowww this is amazing! I'm totally hooked! I cannot wait for more!! AMAZING work!
Author's Response: *blushes* You are too kind, Dwangie! Thank you for the very nice comments. More will definitely be coming.
Date: September 01, 2009 06:12 pm Title: Could it be.....?
I'm still reading! So glad you're back, my friend. xo
Author's Response: Thank you so much, darling! I'm happy to be back too ;o) Next time I'm gone though, please don't spring any surprises like that again, m'kay? Mine was a prank to you but yours wasn't! That's just not fair!!
Date: August 28, 2009 10:34 am Title: Most likely suspect...
Creed said, “They do have it in Mexico. It’s called Pista. It was addicting. Luckily I joined a twelve-step program to quit that vice.”
I love Creed! You really captured his character here.
Author's Response: I love Creed too! I can't take credit for the twelve-step thing. It's all thanks to NanReg who came up with that very funny part. And of course, thank you for the wonderful review :o)
Date: August 28, 2009 10:29 am Title: What the...?!?
Wow! what a start. Toby, Mr. Body???
Author's Response: First off, thank you so much, MyriadProBold, for taking the time to read and review each chapter! That's so kind of you to do that! Second, I was hesitant to kill off Toby at first but then I figured, since they're already doing that in the real game, I might as well :D
Date: August 26, 2009 10:46 pm Title: Most likely suspect...
This story is so much fun! Wonder who the woman standing next to Jim could be.... ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sarah42! I'm glad you're enjoying this story. And yes...who's the mystery woman? ;o)