Date: February 04, 2010 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my goodness, that is so cute! i've read this before, but it's so cute i needed to read it again! i just love the ending when they look at each other, give a second glance and ask them their fake names. so cute!
Date: December 09, 2006 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! So cute. ^^ I attend a camp like this one, and I could so picture young Jim and Pam there. Anyways, it was a really nice story. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks libs! I had fun reliving my camp experiences too. So fun!
Date: October 13, 2006 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a wonderfully sweet and fluffy story. I love that he still had the little "Jonathan and Mallory 4-Eva".
Author's Response: Thanks kaystar! I figured if he kept hot sauce packets, he'd definitely keep that! ;)
Date: October 11, 2006 07:35 am Title: Chapter 1
Hee, so cute!
And it reminds me of this episode of "Who's The Boss" when Tony and Angela realized they'd kissed each other at camp when they were like, 11.
Thanks Puff! Geez, I guess I missed that episode of 'Who's the Boss'! Now I feel a little sad :(
Date: October 10, 2006 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awwww! so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked.
Date: October 10, 2006 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
So adorable! I love how it's canon in our minds that Jim has an older brother named Jonathan. Thanks, girl7!
Author's Response: Oh, believe me, I thanked her too! Even though the only thing I used is his name, I think we all have a picture in our minds at this point of Jonathan! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: October 10, 2006 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Come on! That was adorable! I would love to see preteen Jim and Pam at camp, thank you for this story!
Author's Response: Well, thank you and what a great idea for a challenge McGigi! Camp is just such a fun time for all those little adolescent romances! This was fun.
Date: October 10, 2006 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
How delicious. The perfect distraction from the 'real' situation on the show. Her hands in his hair - how perfect that Jim would remember that. Lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you Colette. And I need some more of her hands in his hair in, as you say, 'real life'. I need it soon!
Date: October 10, 2006 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
"I, uh, have to go..." she stammered and backed away.
It took me a second to realize why I could hear her say this so clearly. :) Lovely little piece, and a wonderful way to fulfill this challenge. So, so sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks lis! And I didn't even consciously write the line for that reason but I guess that side of Pam is just there until she changes her evil ways!
Date: October 10, 2006 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhhh! I did not see that ending coming! Guh, this story is absolutely adorable. Good lord, just as adorable as they are! Jonathan is yours any time - you put him to such good use! ;o) TWSS!
Author's Response: Thanks girl7! And thanks for making Jonathan just so loveable that everybody wants to use him (TWSS), even in name only! I needed to mainline some Jamfluff today ;)
Date: October 10, 2006 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
aww, that was so cute! i loved that her painting was of a house with a terrace :)
Author's Response: Thanks! She said on the show that she read the book when she was 12 so I figured it might be fresh in her mind.