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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2009 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey you - this isn't crazy and you are VERY creative, so there!  Seriously, this was awesome.

"I just can't imagine anyone else. Who else points at the first picture we have of our little thing and says, "He's got your nose!" And pretends choking up, lets me swat his shoulder, pulls me close for a kiss, and pushes his lips against my ear just to tell me he loves me?"

Does that sound like someone who wasn't creative wrote it?

 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2009 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1

This makes me happy. No other thng about it. Just... happiness!

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2009 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

So sweet. Nice job.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2009 07:53 am Title: Chapter 1

*nods* Awesome. I'm glad somebody ran with this, especially you.

Reviewer: Dedeen Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2009 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really loved this story! I was so sweet and well written... The ultrasound flashback was awesome! Thanks for posting this!

Reviewer: Klutzygirl Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2009 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aww. I loved this. It was so sweet.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2009 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1

Yanana, you are a bottomless well of creativity! 

Jim's thumbprint, from Jim's big and working hands, long and strong fingers over the most delicate, the softest and sweetest thing in our lives.  That detail is so simple and so perfect.  How did you even think of it?  Another detail that I loved is that they have a place that they slip away to to avoid the cameras.  Once again, I find myself in awe of your talent. 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18, 2009 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay!  Someone jumped on that 'taping up the ultrasound photo' sweetness! 

Lucky for me, this is the guy I fall asleep next to every night.    Damn straight, Pam.  They both love Italian food.

Nicely done, yanana.  Feel free to 'write something down' any old time!

Reviewer: adampascalfan12 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2009 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

I LOVE it, especially with Jim putting his hand her belly after they saw the ultrasound, and them being so excited. Also I love how Pam has to own some money to her sister. ;) Great job as always!!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2009 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, God love you.  This is so sweet and good,  and just the right dessert after that yummy episode.  I love that they stayed up all night talking and finally his hand landed on her belly...and the moment you described with him joking about the sonogram and then whispering that he loved her in Pam's ear...Ok - THAT is IT.  The most perfect characterization.  And then of course she owes Penny money, because that's the relationship Pam would have with her sister...at least I hope. 

Great stuff here - THANK YOU for getting us started the right way!

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2009 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

yanana, I love when you write. Ah, the pregnancy hormones, they don't go away after the baby is born, though. They stay with you forever, I hope Pam knows that. :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 17, 2009 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

You are a legend - the end!

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