10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2009 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1
This is excellent. You capture that tension perfectly.
10 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2009 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Probably one of my favourite stories of yours. You're really good at angst - and you just captured what I thought they'd be thinking so perfectly!
Date: October 03, 2009 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was just...omg...so them. =]
Date: October 03, 2009 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a great story and I'm with the others that would like you to do this every episode... I love hearing a little bit of "behind the scenes" stuff - which is exactly what this felt like.
Date: October 03, 2009 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nicely done. Both the inevitable argument over this and then the resolution were very in character and believeable.
Date: October 02, 2009 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dear LoveFool,
Please write something like this after every episode. I hope that's not too much to ask of you. But I really need an injection of loveliness every week and you always follow through.
Many thanks,
MilkandSugar
p.s. I loved it :)
Date: October 02, 2009 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Again, excellent post-ep job. Love how they just keep talking until it all gets sorted out.
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Perfect! I love a good story in which they are arguing. Since every couple has disagreements and disappointments in each other and themselves, it's nice to see it brought forth (even if it's only in fic, cause I don't see them bringing it to the show.)
As always, very well done my love(fool!)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can't even put into words how amazing this piece is. Seriously, it is so incredibly in-character with the PERFECT mix of angst and romance. Wow. Totally got goosebumps. Amazing, amazing, amazing.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. that was incredible, LoveFool! the fight was very realistic, you definitely succeeded on that front, but i love how honest they are with each other. the way pam said she was always on jim's side, the way he explains why he did what he did. i see so much love, so great job with that, this was really great to read. and i completely felt like i was pulled into the action, i flinched when pam angrily walked into the house, took off her shoes and stomped up the stairs. amazingly well done, and i really wish you'd keep going, maybe show some more of their harder days, and how at the end they know they will always love each other. just a thought...
anyway, this was fantastic, and as always i loved your writing, LoveFool!
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
My favorite part? The first time she'd ever cried after a fight of there's, he'd contemplated going out to the garage to hang himself. It's lighthearted but still managed to convey the depth of their love. Gah!
This fic was the perfect follow-up to "The Promotion". So sweet and honest. Great job!
Date: October 02, 2009 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great. I'm glad to read your twist on an argument because that way it can still feel real and I know my heart won't be broken at the end of it (well, it may be, but from happiness, and I'm okay with that)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
so wonderful!
but because i'm a spelling nazi, just a few errors to point out:
The first time she'd ever cried after a fight of there's, should be "theirs", and "I don't think there's anyway around that Jim should be "any way."
DON'T HATE ME!!!! :o)
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww. I loved this. I can see Jim and Pam fighting after the episode ended, but later making up.
The "Mrs. Pam Halpert" and her trying to decide whether to eat the donuts were the best part.
Can't wait to read your next fic.
Date: October 02, 2009 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mrs. Pam Halpert does make a world of evils go away, doesn't it. You just KNOW there would be some 'bean' discussion when they got home. Too bad they weren't Jilly Jelly Beans. ;o)
Nicely done, lovefool.
9 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
LoveFool, leave it to you to actually make me enjoy an argument. I could see this happening. I especially loved the little details of their discussion in the bedroom. Even though they were working out a disagreement, it was so tranquil and loving. Like this, for instance: Suddenly he laid down, his head in her lap and his hand against her belly. His voice was hoarse. "How's Baby today?" You affirm that despite disagreements, nothing will tear these two (three?) apart. Excellent, as always.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 11:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved it, your so great at coming up with these moments so soon after the episodes.
I loved "The first time she'd ever cried after a fight of there's, he'd contemplated going out to the garage to hang himself. When she'd assured him there was no need for drastic measures (that was just how she reacted when she too frustrated to get the right words out) he'd decided to let himself live".
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2009 10:55 am Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely. Just lovely. Excellent job!
Date: October 02, 2009 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you! I think you did a great job with what both of them were feeling. Jim laying in her lap while they talked was so perfect and how I see them. Great job.
Date: October 02, 2009 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Great Job! I am so excited about next week! Do you having something in the works already?