10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2009 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Should you bother with this kind of thing again? Is that seriously what you're asking me? Yanana, everything you choose to undertake is amazing. No doubt you could even make "Jim and Pam go to the Dentist" the best fic ever. Or "Jim and Pam take out the Trash." I think you get what I mean. You didn't make my favorites list because you were just kinda OK ; )
Needless to say, this was a delight. Hot and sweet and erotic. My favorite, I think is She wanted him to itch to dig his fingers into it, she wanted him to feel torn between making love to her with or without it on. Nothing like feeling powerful. Delicious.
Date: October 18, 2009 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, wow. Just... wow. That was great.
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2009 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
You should do this again. And again, again, again! I don't normally like 'smut' unless there is feeling to it... if that makes sense? This holds a nice balance between the two. How I (and many others, I'm sure) wish I could send you a nice case of Arbor Mist ;)
Date: October 17, 2009 07:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That was incredible -- both super hot and very sweet and tender! I don't know how you do it. I love smut that not just "insert a into b" (if you know what I mean!), but focuses on their love and how much they adore each other. This was wonderful!
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2009 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. God.
That was...so ridiculously hot. My feeble human brain can't even comprehend how hot it was. Seriously. I have been rendered incoherent. I just...please write more smut. Please spend every hour of every day writing lots of smut for me.
...guh.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
YES you should bother with this kind of thing again! that was so beautifully written. oh and hot.
Date: October 16, 2009 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good GRAVY woman. This was so much more than smut. You're writing makes me j-e-a-l-o-u-s JEALOUS. It was just so deliciously beautiful from start to finish. I love how you showed us a little history through the use of their history with this color. I loved Jim asking the man on the plane if he could sit next to his pregnant wife and hold her hand...How achingly sweet. And little details like her licking the wine off of his lips in the airport...
This was pretty perfect. Keep drinking that Arbor Mist girlfriend.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: October 16, 2009 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
gah! Cold shower, please? And because I'm so shameless...how bout part two with Pam reciprocating? Thanks for jumping onto the smutwagon. I hope others follow suit!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! that was... wow that was great!
I have nothing else to say LOL
Date: October 16, 2009 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well,if I could write like you, I would take on this assignment. But I can't!
However, I most certainly enjoyed your smut!
I think I must go out tomorrow and buy a purple nightie; I wonder what my husband will think of it...
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Never have I been more thankful for alcohol because if these are the results, I'm afraid you may have to become an alcoholic! ;)
I just love how you make everything seem really romantic and sweet as well as unbelievably hot at the same time. It takes a lot of bravery to write smut and a lot of skill to write smut well and my friend, you're both brave and skillful and we're all better for it. Thank you :)
Date: October 16, 2009 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
By all means bother with this kind of thing again! The world needs this kind of thing! :D Nice job.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
i loved this! and i love how much jim is in love with purple and its significance in their relationship. great job! keep going with this kind of smutty sexy writing!
8 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved the ending! It wasn't corny at all. And of course you should continue writing sexy stuff - you do such a good job with it and I do such a good job reading it. We're a perfect team!! Great story!
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree, people are failing us here, we need honeymoon smut :) You did us proud kiddo ;) That was so hot, but also super cute at the same time, which is hard to do well IMO and dude - you did VERY well :)
*sigh and adds to favourites*
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2009 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, yes you should DEFINITELY bother with this kind of thing again. haha. So hot and awesome and makes me wish it were Thursday.