10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2008 11:00 am Title: Living Room
ohhhh hottness
8 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2008 10:46 am Title: Office
Ooooooh
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2006 03:44 pm Title: Office
This was wonderful! Very hot, very erotic. Great job!
Dani
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2006 03:44 pm Title: Office
This was wonderful! Very hot, very erotic. Great job!
Dani
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 10:55 pm Title: Living Room
OK, these two sentences right here: Putting his hands on her shoulders, he turned her around, then slid his hands down to her wrists and brought them together behind her back. The ratcheting sound the cuffs made closing around her wrists affected her like nothing else ever had.
Those two sentences did things to my entire nervous system. Holy Heck lady! I never really thought about "alternative sexual practices" when it came to JAM, but now...?...Now, I think I really love DomJim. Thanks for the hotness.
Author's Response: You're very welcome. I never imagined that I'd be writing smut, much less slightly off-center smut. But it was a lot of fun.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 04:21 pm Title: Bedroom
Please disregard my earlier double-review..."Do you want to send the form again?" should always be answered by No.
I disagree that this is smut for smut's sake. It raised a great issue of trust between Jim and Pam, and Pam's openess towards trying new things is heartwarming (though I suspect that once she gives in to her feelings for Jim on the show, she'd follow him to the moon).
Author's Response:
No worries. :)
I absolutely agree about the amount of trust between them. That was always the big difference with Jim vs. Roy - from the beginning, Pam seemed to know that Jim would never hurt her. It will only get better when they're finally together!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 04:19 pm Title: Office
“Hey.” Pam looked up to see Jim leaning on her desk, a devilish glint in his eyes.
Many great fics have started similarly. I'm sure yours will live up to the promise.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 04:12 pm Title: Office
“Hey.” Pam looked up to see Jim leaning on her desk, a devilish glint in his eyes.
Many great fics have started similarly. I'm sure yours will live up to the promise.
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 09:10 am Title: Bedroom
Wow. That was deliciously hot and sexy.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 05:54 am Title: Bedroom
This is very sexy and fun - I love it :)
Author's Response: Happy to oblige. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:40 pm Title: Bedroom
Yikes, that was fun!
Author's Response: Thanks
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 07:39 am Title: Bedroom
Love it.... Great!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:33 am Title: Bedroom
Wow. Seriously. This was beyond hot but still very sweet and very them. Great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it worked.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:23 am Title: Bedroom
Very hot.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:17 am Title: Office
What is Jim working on?
Author's Response: ?? I'm sorry; I don't think I understand the question.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:00 am Title: Bedroom
Lord have mercy. You've more than proven you could pull off the smut. And you've managed to keep the characters recognizable (love when Jim asks 'hey, you still with me?') even as they sizzle - not an easy feat. So, can I hope you're writing Pam's 'turn'? (Pretty please?)
Author's Response: Thank you! I was so worried about the making sure they stayed in-character (because OOC smut = just reading someone else's fantasy = squick).
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 04:01 am Title: Office
Niiiice! /kevin ;-) Great start!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
The first part is entirely based on a scenario svilleficrecs suggested in her blog. The Jim in her head is much more of a dom than the Jim in mine, but both get the desired effect (of turning Pam on).
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 02:16 am Title: Office
Dropping a manila envelope with panties on a guy's lap....
Boy, that just takes my breath away. Good God. What a brilliant touch.
Author's Response:
Hee! Thanks!
Obviously, she needed to get her underwear to him, and couldn't just hand them to him with everyone watching. So I had to think of something close at hand and not too attention-getting.
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:14 am Title: Restaurant
slid his left hand under her skirt and started rubbing gentle circles on the inside of her thigh.
Gulp. Is it hot in here, or is it just me? Wonderful image. Just EXACTLY the sort of thing a playful Jim Halpert would do. Oh my yes.
Well done.
Author's Response:
*big sigh of relief*
The characterization was my biggest worry. Bodies in motion could be anybody, so I was really trying to establish them as much as I could around the explicit bits.
Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:13 am Title: Bedroom
A Jim striptease. Omigod. I...oh my....'scuse me while I fetch my smelling salts. Lord have mercy.
One word of advice, based on experience: handcuffs should ALWAYS be padded for events like this. In the throes of passion, Pam would be tossing herself over the headboard and wouldn't feel a thing, but the edges of the metal cuffs can do serious damage to the delicate tendons of the wrist--and let's not forget that Pam uses a keyboard for a living. It would be a nice (and loving) touch for Jim to make sure her hands are well padded before locking them to the headboard.
Now I'm going to go back and reread this. O my goodness.
Thanks.
Author's Response: This is clearly a YMMV point. The only padded cuffs I've ever seen have been those silly novelty things, which just aren't in the same league as basic, police-standard handcuffs. (And the only padding that might stay independent of the cuffs are athletic sweat bands, which frankly = not sexy.) If you keep them loose enough, all the pressure is on the bones at the base of the hand, so very little risk of soft-tissue damage. Plus, padded cuffs don't result in the red grooves that may or may not be gone by the time you get to work the next day - another integral part of the experience. But thank you for the review!
6 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 12:09 am Title: Living Room
Oh. My
Handcuffs.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Yeah. Apparently, there was a handcuff-shaped hole in the Jam smut universe, so I needed to give it a try.
Date: October 12, 2006 10:35 pm Title: Office
Holy crap. That. Was. Hot. *runs away to fan self*
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 12, 2006 10:24 pm Title: Bedroom
Oh MY! That was amazing! Are you going to write a "next time"? Because...please do it. That was so perfect.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I was *terrified* to post this.
Not planning on a "next time," but hell, I didn't start out planning to write this one, either.