Date: September 08, 2011 08:28 pm Title: The Real Deal
That's great story and the characters are in character. My favourite is Andy and I think got him right. I hope you will write more!
9 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2010 10:18 am Title: The Real Deal
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. Once again, the way you wrote these characters' voices were spot on, and the little details about Andy's mannerisms and Pam knowing exactly how to cheer up Andy. I also liked how cute Jim and Pam were and what a team they are together.
Reading this, I was also reminded of the ending in "The Duel" when both Dwight and Andy realized that Angela was not worth it and it made me hurt for them. Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2010 11:08 pm Title: The Real Deal
I loved it. I loved how it was more Jim and Pam compared to just Jim.
Poor Andy aw!
Date: January 29, 2010 09:09 pm Title: The Real Deal
I'm really enjoying all the little snippets into the frienemy time between Andy and Pam (and Pam and Angela.) I have to say the first one you wrote from season 3 is my fave- Longing Jim and/or Pam sits right with me now that everything is right.
One super minor nit-pick, I wasn't clear if Andy was calling Angela "Ang" or "Angie," as I've never seen "Ange." I could be totally wrong, though :)