Reviews For The Perfect Storm
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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28, 2023 02:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Very entertaining. Be careful with switching into the present tense if the story is written in the past. Easy to picture Pam from episode 2x06 here.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2006 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

wonderful story

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2006 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

I actually read this fic this morning, but didn't want to login at work to review...
Your use of the umbrella as a confined space was truly original!

Author's Response: Thank you. It's so nice to read such wonderful compliments.

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2006 01:35 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I really enjoyed this story. This was such a creative way to put them in a confined situation even in an open space. Loved it.

(By the way, just as a heads up, the quote you have at the beginning of your story is from The Fight, not from The Injury. :))

Author's Response: Ack! I fixed that...thanks!

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2006 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done -- the umbrella was a very creative response!

Author's Response: Thanks. I was listening to a song on the radio about the rain, and the umbrella just popped into my head.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2006 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooo, that was really good. And a creative response to Confined Spaces challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you! And, coming from you, that really means a lot. I love your stories!

Reviewer: Pixel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2006 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really love this story. And the ending worked out very nicely ;)

I hope we'll see more from you!

Author's Response: Thanks, Pixel (or should I say, contributor!) Your suggestion really gave it a good ending.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 12, 2006 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

An umbrella? Sheer brillance. Sad but utterly perfect.

Author's Response: Thank you! It did make me sad to write the ending, but I was doing a prequel, so I couldn't have a happy JAM ending.

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