Date: March 04, 2010 04:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Arghhh! This is distressing to read, because I feel such incredible pain for Pam! And yet, I love it. Please update soon, I want more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It is a little awful right now, isn't it? But it'll get happier!
Date: March 03, 2010 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am really loving this. Poor Pam, having Jim for so long and then going back to Roy must be killing her. I am so excied to see what you have planned. Is Jim with Katy? ahhhhhh UPDATE :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It would certainly be killing me if I were her! I'm glad you like it and are excited for what comes next!
Date: March 03, 2010 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
what..thats it..noo noo.i want more!!!
it finish way too soon.
i my god i can even begin to think how she feels, been so near jim and not be able to actually be with him. you really know how to transmit that feeling
yearning for the update
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think I was able to portray it all well. I'll try and update soon!
Date: March 03, 2010 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was great! I think this is really good and I can't wait to see how you continue! Two typos, you spelled apologize halfway through the chapter with an 's' and then when Roy said 'can you at least help me out?' you forgot the t in at. Otherwise, this looks great and I'm looking forwards to more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll fix the typos -- I always manage to have a few! I'm glad you like the story so far.
Date: March 03, 2010 07:28 am Title: Chapter 2
Ahhh yes! I really do love this story so much. Great characterization ("Don't call me Pammy." oh, yes!) and flowing writing. And I'm so glad to see that while it all might have been a dream, Fancy New Beesly was the one that woke up. ;)
I'm just so intrigued by the premise of this. Such a crazy universe! Keep it up and update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Hopefully the next update will come much sooner than this one did :)
Date: February 05, 2010 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude, you better update this like... yesterday!!!!
LOVE IT! So original and full of awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hadn't even realised that it had been accepted and posted until I happened to check it's status -- I never got an e-mail telling me it was accepted! But now that it has been, I'll have to post the next chapter as soon as I can. I'm glad you like it :)
Date: February 04, 2010 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this. this is my new favorite story, and i'll have you know that obsessing refreshing of the "most recent" page will be in my future. everything's a dream? what a concept! this is so fresh and new and amazing i can hardly wait! great start and great writing, i'm riveted! update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's high praise! I'll definitely try and update soon :)