Reviews For After The Rain
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Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2010 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

*sigh* Just glorious. And how adorable is "ladybug?!" Nothing cuter.

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much :)  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

So, it's snowing up to my eyebrows here, but this had me feeling warm and smelling the rain. I wanted to venture outside... until I remembered there is no green. Only white. Thank you for giving me the slightest bit of spring with this lovely story.

(Don't know if it's meant to be spring- probably autumn, but that's how it feels to me. Hope you don't mind! :)

Author's Response: Aww I'm glad I could help! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your sweet note.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

So freaking adorable!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That was so beautiful! I don't want to say anything else to distract myself from the gorgeous image in my mind. So fantastic job and toodle-loo!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I always battle with how much description is too much, but I hope I found a good balance to give the readers enough to picture it in their heads like I did as I wrote it :)

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh, some lovely, warm and fuzzy JAM. Just what I needed today. Thanks ker

Author's Response: So nice I got you twice ;)

Reviewer: jinx Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh, some lovely, warm and fuzzy JAM. Just what I needed today. Thanks ker

Author's Response: Good timing for the impending snow that's blanketing most of the country :) Thanks so much for reading.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1

That was breathtaking, and written so smoothly and quietly. Perfect tone. Very well written. I hope you're inspired to write something else soon! This was lovely.

Author's Response: You are so sweet - thank you so much!  This one just seemed to come to me and flowed with such ease.  I feel like my muse for them has come back to me.  I may do another little something here soon :)

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Beautifully conceived and realized.  I felt like a welcomed eavesdropper to Jim's most private thoughts.  Well done. 

Just a note for future reference:  the correct spelling is door "jamb". 



Author's Response: Thanks so much - I don't know why, but for me, I find it really easy to just delve into his voice.

ps made the correction!

Reviewer: Klutzygirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 06:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww. That was so cute. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much - I appreciate you reading & taking the time to leave a little note :)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2010 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Here in their backyard, Pam pregnant, lying in his arms after the rain, that’s all he needed. There was nowhere else in the world that Jim Halpert would rather be.

He's got his whole world in his arms.  Beautiful. :-)



Author's Response: Thank you so much my friend :)  I appreciate the love/support and the last minute OMG I HAVE A STORY I NEED A BETA I threw at you!

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