Date: March 10, 2010 07:03 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
Jim and Pam, you fools! Don't you know you'll never be ready! ;-)
This was lovely, xoxoxo. It reminds me of the night before I was induced with my daughter. The both of us realizing the shift that was about to happen in our lives. You captured that moment perfectly.
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2010 12:35 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
*sigh* Beautifully in character.
Date: March 07, 2010 09:27 am Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
Ha! Jim! I'd get the gold in diapering. Wait until there's stuff in the diapers. And out of the diapers. And all over. Wait until that girl starts squirting (yes Jim girls do it too).
You. Me. Diapering Olympics. Be there.
And they're ready. God it's happened already. They're parents! I was talking to my friend this morning, and it still all seems like this crazy dream (um, not like I dream about Jim and Pam.... no.... not me....), but it's so crazy that they are married and parents! It's just.... how did that happen!
Date: March 06, 2010 05:06 am Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
How did I not see this until after the blessed event?! Jim helping Pam turn over was a great little touch - and love her being the size of Delaware, his bro' being switched at birth.... what a lovely little prequel this was to read now!
Author's Response: I don't know. How did you??? :) I'm so glad you found it though and even gladder (hee!) that you liked it. :)
Date: March 05, 2010 06:29 am Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
Well..."awwwwwww" isn't really a review. But it's all I've got.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
Author's Response: Awwwwwwwwwwww totally works. :) Thank you lis!!!
Date: March 04, 2010 11:57 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
Hugs...your voice here is spot-freaking-on. I'd know this was Jim and Pam talking even if you never used their names. So, so good.
Write more, lady. This just made me too happy.
Author's Response:
LF - that is the very best compliment you could give me.
And I'm trying. I have a head full of ideas - they just haven't reached my fingers in a while. :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2010 10:49 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
So so cute. Actually adorable, and perfect. Nice job! What did you think of the episode, xoxoxo??? I absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I loved the episode. It was the perfect mix of sweet and hilarious in my opinion. I thought it was incredibly well done.
Date: March 04, 2010 04:09 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
Oh, this is WONDERFUL dialogue! Pitch perfect. I love how they take turns reassuring each other ... and still teasing each other. Pam's not the size of a continent but a state ... Maybe Delaware? Priceless.
This is my favorite line though. Just rings so true to character:
Punctuality has its merits, Pam.
Author's Response: Thanks VB! I love to write the two of them talking - about anything really. I'm so glad it rang true to you!
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2010 03:37 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
This makes me soooooooo exciteeeeeeed!!! Very beautiful!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks H_H!!! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: March 04, 2010 01:49 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
xoxoxo, thank you for posting such a beautiful and sweet story. It makes the wait for tonight's episode much easier. Your story hits all the right notes. I laughed, I smiled, and it tugged on my heart strings.
Just wonderful.
Author's Response: Well my work is done then. Glad you actually got to see the episode! I know it was dicey there for a few! Thank you for such a lovely review. :)
Date: March 04, 2010 01:41 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
That was so lovely to read before the episode tonight. Adorable.
Author's Response: Thanks yanana! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: March 04, 2010 01:21 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
Oh my word, that was so sweet. I feel like I just ate dessert (in a good way). Very in character - nicely done. Not much longer to wait now... *tick* *tock*
Author's Response: Writing this was very helpful in getting through the hours before the episode. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: March 04, 2010 12:31 pm Title: the peaceful quiet you create for me
Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you!!