Date: March 05, 2010 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god, this is one of the sweetest post baby episode things I've read. So darn cute! Ahhh! I can't contain it, this is just fantastic. I just love all the emotion and love you expressed through this, great job!
One quick note: in the line where you have
'"Three." Your wife says.' You should add the r after you. (right now it's just 'you wife says.'
Fantastic job, and this is just perfect! I need to go watch the episode again... and stop adding stuff to my favorites, but this is just so good, I'll add it anyway!