Reviews For I Can't
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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2010 06:46 pm Title: I Can't

I just loved that scene - thanks for writing this to take me back to it.

Reviewer: bloomsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2010 06:46 am Title: I Can't

Bitter sweet. Very well written :P

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31, 2010 11:26 am Title: I Can't

Very nice, sensitive treatment.

Reviewer: Sarah42 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2010 12:51 pm Title: I Can't

I love this scene and this is a great interpretation :)

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 11:47 am Title: I Can't

This was absolutely beautfiful! There was so much expression for having so little dialog and it just flowed so perfectly. Great job! One note, though out the chapter you have a few parts in italics where there's no space between the 'I' and 'can't' - just one minor detail you can edit out. Other than that, that was just beautiful! And great job with the ending describing the kiss!

Reviewer: kam Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 04:22 am Title: I Can't

WOW - that was great! You really captured his soul with this one - thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 02:19 am Title: I Can't

oh this is just so perfect

Reviewer: blue_eyed_shaz Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2010 12:03 am Title: I Can't

love it! very jim!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2010 09:41 pm Title: I Can't

That was lovely. I love fics like this :)

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