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Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2010 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

So in character and awesome. Thanks!

Reviewer: AtTheStars455 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very cute - loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 07:23 am Title: Chapter 1

This is something they should have filmed back in Season two! I can see it playing in my head as I read. The looks on their faces, Dwight's mounting frustration, Pam's 'look' to Roy, Jim leaning on Pam's desk- everything. "'That's on the Elvish calendar,' said Jim." Perfect!

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! I am really happy that people are finding it to be in the spirit of season 2.

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2010 04:27 am Title: Chapter 1

A perfect birthday prank to make Pam's day that much more fun!  Very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2010 10:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, Jim, rescuing her as usual. Very sweet, old-school vibe to this one.

Author's Response: Thanks! I like "old school."

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this absolutely reads like Season 2 canon. Jim could not have given Pam a better birthday present back then. Very believable and true to character. 

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you very much! True story: math - and luck - led it to Season 2. I won't go into the gory details. But I had the ----- thing done and on the stove, and then, for no apparent reason, I'm watching "Broke, " and I hear Pam say, "You blame the 30-year old woman who got in the passenger seat ...". D'oh!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

Guten Tag!  Where have you been hiding all this time??? This was so clever and so funny.  I have to say that this cracked me up the most:  Pam froze.  So did Creed.  LOL :D I could picture the entire story playing out as a I read.  Awesome.  Thank you for coming out of hibernation for the best surprise party around! :-*

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Alas, parenthood and work have proven incompatible with generating fanfic lately. But this was a worthy occasion to crawl out of lurkdom. Your encouragement and unfailingly happy vibes are really something else. And yes, it's true ... how can Creed not make anyone laugh? Have a really happy, well, month!

Reviewer: SyK Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 06:12 am Title: Chapter 1

What a great little story. I really like your style here, sort of laconic and simple. It's amazing how much you can tell with dialog and minimal exposition.

Author's Response: Bless you! That it's fanfic helps - a lot. When I wrote that Pam "shot Roy a look," I could see exactly the expression on her face. And there was a shot that you might see it, too, because you'd probably seen it before.

Reviewer: Katie J Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 02, 2010 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1

This is just adorable :) and funny. and, oh Jim. He really is just always there to save her in S2 isn't he?

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, he really is.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Urm, hi! The Carded line at the end? Wins all. That is soooo cute!!!

Jim is so adorable, and when he was wishing Dwight a happy birthday, I was LOLing so loud!!! And the, "Who is Roy?" > "The man who sent you the balloons?"... seriously fantastic LMAO!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I loved writing the "who is Roy?" part. It was a three-fer.

Reviewer: emhunter24 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 11:59 am Title: Chapter 1

yup. the line about getting "carded" is probably the most adorable thing ever. jim is my hero. thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks! Jim is everybody's hero.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahh, that was hilarious! I just loved all the characters reactions and how upset Dwight was. Nice job making Dwight and Michael so realistic, I have yet to write a story with them because, frankly, I'm just scared to have to write them! Great story, this will make NanReg proud!

Author's Response: Thanks! "Making NanReg proud ...". Hmmm. If you want to see why I, at least, kicked in to this series, go read the first chapter of my first real story, "Tough Love," and imagine it had ended there. For no reason at all, other than to be nice, she encouraged me to write more. She took a fledgling author's little, weird story, and helped make it into a bigger, perhaps less weird story.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1

That's so cute! Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Very, very cute! You've captured Jim (and Dwight) perfectly. Loved this line especially - it is exactly how Jim would respond. Awesome.

"That's on the Elvish calendar," said Jim.

Author's Response: Thanks! The Lord of the Rings is where Jim and Dwight's inner geeks can meet and understand each other.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 06:37 am Title: Chapter 1

What a fun story!  I liked the Jim and Dwight banter and the way Jim saved Pam's day.  Oh Season 2 Jim and Pam, how adorable you two are!



Author's Response: Thanks! They are, aren't they?

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I love how you really made this an ensemble piece and kept everyone in character. The Elvish calendar and the Hassenfass knife were nice bits of the insanity that we all know and love:) Of course it's so much fun to watch Jim turn one of Pam's problems into a headache for Dwight, but the little banter at the end was the icing on this cake :) Great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I forgot about the Hassenfass knife until I watched Survivor Man again the other day.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2010 05:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Love it!  Perfect Jim.  You are SO going to get carded.  That's just adorable.

Author's Response: Thanks! The poor guy. His day will come.

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