Reviews For Closet Skeleton
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Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2010 10:35 pm Title: Lost all control

wow quite intense and hard to belive that you can be without eating for so long ;P its incredible what the human body can take..
i love the fact that i use the same shampoo as jim xD
another little detail she ran 15 miles..made love with jim(god know with what energy)..and just wore the same clothes all sweat to a restaurant..??

Reviewer: 90lbgumby Signed 5 [Report This]
Date: August 16, 2010 06:23 pm Title: Lost all control

There were a lot of things I really liked about this story, but I think I would have liked to see you develop it a bit more over a few chapters. Its a deep topic to take on for fanfic, and I applaud you for that. Really think could be developed into a longer look into this potential issue for Pam.

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